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-## Ebony FicWriter
+## Ebony FicWriter Introduction
 
 "I don't know what you mean," Ebony replied innocently. "I just love writing stories for the fandom." 
 
 It was true enough; it wasn't as if she had ever tried to create anything original herself. Her prose style showed no sign of having matured over the years. 
-If anything, it was even more unashamedly purile than when she first started out, with every sentence dripping with the most lurid double entendres imaginable. Yet still she insisted on ploughing ahead, determined to cram into each and every story every single one of those ghastly Gothic clichés - not to mention assorted characters from the Wizarding World That Shall Not Be Named  - regardless of whether they fitted or made any sense at all. And her crush on Draco Malfoy didn't seem to be going away either...
+If anything, it was even more unashamedly purile than when she first started out, with every sentence dripping with the most lurid double entendres imaginable. Yet still she insisted on ploughing ahead, determined to cram into each and every story every single one of those ghastly Gothic clichés - not to mention assorted characters from the Wizarding World That Shall Not Be Named  - regardless of whether they fitted or made any sense at all. And there was still that disturbing fixation with Draco Malfoy ...
 
 "Ebony, darling?"
 
-She looked up, startled. "Oh! Hi!" She blushed slightly.
+She looked up, startled. "Oh!" She blushed slightly.
 
-"What you like to write about these days?" I asked casually.
+"Look," I said, after a few moments' thought. "There are one or two things. You have improved your grammar slightly. Barely noticeably, but still ..."
 
-"Just stuff, really. I'm working on a new project right now. It's called 'The Unfortunate Lustfulness of Draco Malfoy.' Do you want me to read some of it to you?"
+"Grammar!" She said disdainfully. "I had never issue with my grammar!"
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+"Well, maybe not," I agreed, feeling vaguely guilty. "At least you've made an effort. So what you like to write about these days?" I changed subject.
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+"Just sexxy stuff, really. I'm working on a new project right now. It's called 'The Unfortunate Lustfulness of Draco Malfoy.' Do you want me to read some of it to you?"
 
 I shook my head quickly. "No, thank you. Sounds quite... not my style.  But I hope you enjoy writing it."