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 This dataset contains much of the tree inventory, images and stories data that was collected on the [Curio platform](https://www.youtube.com/@curio-xyz7991/videos) before it was sunset. The data was extraced from a number of database tables and includes;
 
-- The inventory type details of 2.5 millions trees captured across locations worldwide (location, species, diameter at breast height (DBH), height, vitality etc, where available)
+- The inventory details of 2.5 millions trees from locations across the globe (location, species, diameter at breast height (DBH), height, vitality etc, where available)
 - 27,288 images of trees that were uploaded onto the platform by our community and linked to individual trees and their species information etc.
 - Notes (stories), tags and conversations linked to trees.
 
 ### Dataset Description
 
-Curio was an environmental education and outreach platform that was predominantly focused on urban forestry. It connected stakeholders involved in the management of urban forestry with the public and importantly made all data uploaded via its web and mobile apps publicly available. The platform was live from March 2016 until August 2023 when the maintainence overheads made its ongoing availability infeasible. Curio was supported in its early stages by two European Space Agency projects, through the [New Commons](https://business.esa.int/projects/new-commons) and [Curio Canopy](https://business.esa.int/projects/curio-canopy). A sense of the platform and how it worked can be found via the videos on its supporting [youtube channel](https://www.youtube.com/@curio-xyz7991/videos)
+Curio was an environmental education and outreach platform that was predominantly focused on urban forestry. It connected the various stakeholders involved in the management of urban forestry with the public and importantly made all data uploaded via its web and mobile apps publicly available. The platform was live from March 2016 until August 2023 when the maintainence overheads made its ongoing availability infeasible. Curio was supported in its early stages by two European Space Agency projects, through the [New Commons](https://business.esa.int/projects/new-commons) and [Curio Canopy](https://business.esa.int/projects/curio-canopy). A sense of the platform and how it worked can be found via the videos on its supporting [youtube channel](https://www.youtube.com/@curio-xyz7991/videos)
 
 This repository contains much of the tree inventory, images and stories data that was collected on the platform via our community, projects we helped support and open data tree inventories we uploaded onto the platform. We are keen to make this data available for research purposes in the hope it might be of benefit to others and to further the efforts of our community. 
 
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 ### Dataset Sources and Attribution
 
-Many people picked up the app and contributed to the data that was collected. Curio was also used to support many great projects and initiatives. We have endeavoured to mention many below along with the open data tree inventories we uploaded onto the platform. 
+Many people picked up the app and contributed to the data that was collected. Curio was also used to support many great projects and initiatives. We have endeavoured to mention many of those projects below along with the open data tree inventories we uploaded onto the platform. 
 
 #### Collaborative projects supported by Curio