revised readme based on feedback

README.md

@@ -114,7 +114,9 @@ otherwise released publicly by the relevant court or tribunal. While the open co
 that court (and some tribunal) materials be made available to the public, there are privacy risks when these 
 materials become easily and widely available. These privacy risks are particularly acute for marginalized groups, 
 including refugees and other non-citizens whose personal and sensitive information is included in some of the
-documents in this dataset. One mechanism used to try to achieve a balance between the open court principle 
+documents in this dataset. For example, imagine a repressive government working with private data aggregators to 
+collect information that is used to target families of political opponents who have sought asylum abroad.
+One mechanism used to try to achieve a balance between the open court principle 
 and privacy is that in publishing the documents in this dataset, the relevant courts and tribunals prohibit 
 search engines from indexing the documents. Users of this data are required to do the same.
 
@@ -135,7 +137,7 @@ the Government of Canada.
 The Refugee Law Lab recognizes that this dataset -- and further research using the dataset -- raises challenging 
 questions about how to balance protecting privacy, enhancing government transparency, addressing information 
 asymmetries, and building technologies that leverage data to advance the rights and interests of 
-refugees and other displaced people (rather than technologies that 
+refugees and other displaced people, as well as assisting those working with them (rather than technologies that 
 [enhance the power of states](https://citizenlab.ca/2018/09/bots-at-the-gate-human-rights-analysis-automated-decision-making-in-canadas-immigration-refugee-system/) 
 to control the movement of people across borders).
 
@@ -146,12 +148,16 @@ encourage other users to do the same.
 
 We also encourage users to try to avoid participating in building technologies that harm refugees and other 
 marginalized groups, as well as to connect with [community organizations](https://www.migrationtechmonitor.com/ways-to-help) 
-working in this space, and to [listen directly](https://www.migrationtechmonitor.com/about-us) to people who are affected by new technologies. 
+working in this space, and to [listen directly](https://www.migrationtechmonitor.com/about-us) and learn from people who are affected by new technologies. 
+
+We will review the use these datasets periodically to examine whether continuing to publicly release these datasets achieves 
+the Refugee Law Lab's goals of advancing the rights and interests of refugees and other marginalized groups without creating 
+disproportionate risks and harms, including risks related to privacy and human rights.
+
 
 ### Discussion of Biases
 
-The dataset reflects many biases present in legal decision-making, including biases based on race, immigration status, gender, sexual orientation, 
-religion, disability, socio-economic class, etc. 
+The dataset reflects many biases present in legal decision-making, including biases based on race, immigration status, gender, sexual orientation, religion, disability, socio-economic class, and other intersecting categories of discrimination.
 
 ### Other Known Limitations