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1 | gec | For example, countries with a lot of deserts can transform their desert to increase their habitable land and use irrigation to provide clean water to the desert. | In this example, for example, a country with lots of deserts could terraform its deserts to increase its habitable land, and using water to provide a clean water supply to desert. | In this example, for example, a country with lots of deserts, can Terraform its desert into an area that is more habitable for its inhabitants. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: For example, countries with a lot of deserts can terraform their desert to increase their habitable land and using irrigation to provide clean water to the desert. |
2 | gec | As the number of people grows, the need for a habitable environment is unquestionably increasing. | # As the population grows, a need for habitable environments is undeniably essential. | # As the population grows, a need for habitable environments is undeniably essential. | Improve the grammaticality: As the number of people grows, the need of habitable environment is unquestionably essential. |
3 | gec | Besides some technological determinists that allow the development of biometric identification, this technology is also shaped by three social factors, namely, the desire of society for safety, convenience, and economy. | In addition, some technologically-determinant social factors also shape this technology. These factors include the desire for safety and convenience, and the economy. | In addition, some technologically-determinant social factors are shaped by a desire for safety and convenience, as well as an economy. | Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Besides some technologically determinists that allow the development of biometric identification, this technology is also shaped by three social factors, namely, the desire of the society for safety, convenience and economy. |
4 | gec | Safety is one of the crucial problems that many countries and companies are concerned about. | # Safety is a crucial problem that many companies and countries are concerned about. | # Safety is a crucial problem that many companies and countries are concerned about. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Safety is one of the crucial problems that many countries and companies concern. |
5 | gec | On the one hand, more and more viruses and hackers can access personal computers, so secret data and documents may be stolen. | # On the one hand, more and More viruses and hackers can access your personal computer, so secret data, documents, and other personal information may be leaked. | # On the one hand, more and More viruses and hackers can access your personal computer, so secret data, documents, and other personal information may be compromised. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: On one hand more and more virus and hack can access personal computers, so the secret data and documents may be stolen. |
6 | gec | We can have a fingerprint verification reader combined with a built-in smart card reader, and it only takes seconds to verify one's identification. | #We can have a fingerprint verification scanner combined with an integrated smart card reader and it will only take seconds for one's identity to be verified. | #We can have a fingerprint verification scanner combined with an integrated smart card reader and it will only take seconds for one's identity to be verified. | Improve the grammar of this text: We can have fingerprint verification reader combined with built-in smartcard reader, and it only takes seconds to verify one's identification. |
7 | gec | Nuclear technology has come a long way since Ernest Rutherford first split the atom in 1917. | The nuclear technology has come a very long way from Ernest Rutherford's first split of the atom. | The nuclear technology has come a very long way from Ernest Rutherford's discovery of the atom to the present day. | Fix grammar in this sentence: Nuclear technology had come a long way since Ernest Rutherford first split the atom in 1917. |
8 | gec | The subsequent realization that the additional neutrons produced from a fission reaction could induce a nuclear chain reaction has sparked a widespread interest in nuclear technology. | In the subsequent realization, that additional neutrons can induce nuclear chain reactions, sparked off a widespread interest, in the nuclear technology sector. | In the subsequent realization, that additional neutrons can induce nuclear chain reactions, sparked off a widespread interest among the public in the development of nuclear technologies. | Fix grammar in the sentence: The subsequent realization that the additional neutrons produced from fission reaction can induce a nuclear chain reaction sparked off widespread interest in nuclear technology. |
9 | gec | The leakage of radioactive gas into the atmosphere prompted the many anti-nuclear demonstrations that sprang up across America in the following months. | The leakage of nuclear waste into the air prompted the numerous anti-nuke demonstrations that sprang up across America in 1986. | The leakage of nuclear waste into the air prompted the numerous anti-nuke demonstrations that sprang up across America in 1986. | Update to remove grammar errors: The leakage of radioactive gas into the atmosphere prompted the many anti-nuclear demonstrations that sprung up across the America in the following months. |
10 | gec | Although the reactor was eventually cleaned up and decontaminated, the damage dealt to nuclear power was irreversible and caused its subsequent decline. | The reactor was ultimately cleaned up, and the damage dealt to the nuclear power industry was irreversible, and caused the subsequent decline of nuclear power. | The reactor was ultimately cleaned up, and the damage dealt to the nuclear power industry was irreversible, and caused the subsequent decline of nuclear power. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Although the reactor was eventually cleaned up and decontaminated, the damaged dealt to nuclear power was irreversible and caused its subsequent decline. |
11 | gec | To partly offset this gigantic demand for energy, China has launched an ambitious program to produce 16% of its electricity from nuclear power by 2030. | The aim of this program is partly offset by the huge demand for electricity, which has been rising steadily over the past few decades. | The aim of this program is partly offset by the huge demand for electricity, which has been rising steadily over the past few decades. | Improve the grammar of this text: To partly offset this gigantic demand for energy, China had launched an ambitious program to produce 16% of its electricity from nuclear power by 2030. |
12 | gec | This endeavor to produce more nuclear power has stimulated the development of safer designs for nuclear reactors. | In this endeavor, the development has stimulated the growth of safer nuclear reactors | # This endeavor has stimulated the design of more nuclear reactors, which have produced safer designs for nuclear power plants. | Fix grammar errors in this sentence: This endeavor to produce more nuclear power have stimulated the development of safer designs of nuclear reactors. |
13 | gec | In conclusion, nuclear technology development has always been driven by social factors. | In conclusion, the development of nuclear technology has always had to be driven by societal factors. | In conclusion, the development of nuclear technology has always had to be driven by societal factors. | Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In conclusion, nuclear technology development had always been driven by social factors. |
14 | gec | World War 2 has given it momentum in its initial research, but it will be mankind's need for a renewable and environmentally friendly energy source that will drive nuclear technology's future developments. | The world war 2 has given it a momentum in the initial research of its development, but will it be the need of a renewable, and environmentally-friendly energy source for the future developments? | In World War II, the world had given momentum to its research in the initial stages of its development, but will it be the need of the hour to drive nuclear technologies' future developments? | Improve the grammaticality: World War 2 had given it momentum in its initial research, but it will be mankind's need for a renewable and environmentally friendly energy source that will drive nuclear technology's future developments. |
15 | gec | These solutions may be generated by analyzing existing products to find out how the weaknesses can be overcome while retaining the strengths. | The solutions may also be generated from analyzing the existing products and finding out ways to improve them while retaining their strength. | This solution may be analyzed to find ways to improve the existing products so that they can still meet the needs of the customers while retaining their strength. | Remove grammatical mistakes: These solutions may be generated by analyzing existing products to find out how the weaknesses can be improved while retaining the strength. |
16 | gec | Therefore careful analysis of a product has to be made before selecting a solution for testing and implementation. | # Therefore, careful analysis and careful testing of the products have to be done before selecting solutions for testing, and implementation of the solution. | # Therefore, careful analysis and careful implementation of the products have to be done before selecting the solutions for testing, and implementation of them. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Therefore careful analysis of the product has to be made before selecting a solution for testing and implementation. |
17 | gec | An example is water, which is a good renewable resource and is plentiful. | # An example of a renewable resource is water, and is abundant. | This is an example of a renewable resource that is abundant and is readily available. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: An example is water which is a good renewable resource and is plentiful. |
18 | gec | This is because a large body of water is needed to harness the same amount of energy produced by a small amount of fuel. | # This is due to a large amount of water needed to produce the same amount of energy as a small quantity of fuel | The main reason for this is that a large amount of water needs to be harnessed to produce the same amount of energy as a small percentage of fuel can produce. | Fix grammaticality: This is because a large body of water is needed to harness the same energy produced by a small amount of fuel. |
19 | gec | All the solutions will be thoroughly analyzed by engineers before coming to a conclusion. | The solutions will all be thoroughly analyzed by the engineering team before they come to a final conclusion. | The solutions will all be thoroughly analyzed by the engineering team before they come to a final conclusion. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: All the solutions will be thoroughly analysed by the engineers before coming to a conclusion. |
20 | gec | As a result, students have no chance to develop their creative thinking abilities and gradually become. | The result is that students have a limited chance of developing their creativity and eventually become stereotyped. | The result is that students have a limited chance of developing their creativity and eventually become stereotyped. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence: As a result, students have no chance to develop their creative thinking and gradually become stereotype. |
21 | gec | However, after one year's study, he found history not suitable for him and became interested in physics, and showed great talent. | This year, he studied history, and he found that history not suited for him, and became an interested in the physics. He showed great talents. | This year, I found a study that was not suitable, and he found his history not suited for himself, and became an interest in physics, and showed a great talent in it. | Fix grammar in the sentence: However, after one year study, he found history not suitable for himself and became interested in physics and showed great talent. |
22 | gec | Whether China can take this chance to catch up with those well-developed countries or even surpass them depends on China's solving the present problems. | # whether China can catch up or surpass those well developed countries, or even take advantage of them, depends on the country's track record in solving the current problems. | The situation in China can be taken to be either a chance or a chance to surpass those well developed countries. | Fix grammar: Whether China can take this chance to catch up with those well-developed countries or even surpass them depends on China's trail of solving the present problems. |
23 | gec | If China can come up with an effective policy to change its education system and stimulate innovation, China's pace to flourish may become even faster. | The Chinese government can come with effective policies to change their education system, and stimulate innovative innovation. China's rate to flourish will become even more rapid. | The Chinese government can come with effective policies to change their education system, and this will help China to flourish. | Improve the grammar of this text: If China can come up with effective policy to change its education system and stimulate innovation, China's pace to flourish may become even faster. |
24 | gec | The process of developing a new product based on innovation is not an easy task for innovators. | The process of creating a new invention based on innovative thinking is a difficult task for innovators. | The process of creating a new invention based on innovative thinking is a difficult task for innovators. | Make the sentence grammatical: The process of developing a new product based on innovation is not an easy task for the innovators. |
25 | gec | Through the distribution and adoption of innovative products by the public or specific users, innovators have to face the consequences. | # By diffusion, adoption, and the consequences of innovation products, the innovations have to be faced by the users. | # By diffusion, adoption, and the consequences of innovation products, the innovations have to be faced by the users. | Make the sentence grammatical: By diffusion and adoption of the innovation products by the public or specific users, the innovators have to face the consequences. |
26 | gec | These are not the only challenges that innovators are going to deal with. | The innovators are not going to face the same challenges as the ordinary people. | The innovators are not going to face the same challenges as the ordinary people. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: These are not the only challenges that the innovators are going to deal with. |
27 | gec | In order to proceed from the initial stage of innovation development to the final stage, the most important issue is to have a huge sum of funds for development and commercial purposes. | The most important aspect of the innovation development process is the amount of funding for the development and commercialization of the product. | This is the main issue that is most important for the development of the innovation process from initial stage to final stage. | Fix grammar errors: In order to process from the initial stage of innovation development to the final stage, the most important issue is to have a huge sum of fund for development and commercial purposes. |
28 | gec | So, the manufacturing company, for example, the company that innovators are working for, is one of the major investors that is providing the fund. | The manufacture company for example is the one that is working for the innovators, and the investors are the ones that are providing the funds. | The manufacture company for example is the one that is working for the innovators. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: So, the manufacture company, for example, the company that the innovators are working for, is one of the major investors that is providing the fund. |
29 | gec | For example, if the manufacturing company does not earn profit in the market, then in order to reduce the cost and prevent the loss from getting worse, the manufacturing company has to stop funding the innovators for the development of their prototypes. | The manufacturing company, on the other hand, does not have to earn profit from the market; instead, it has to start funding the innovations for the prototypes development process. | The manufacturing company, on the other hand, does not have to earn profit from the market; instead, it can stop funding innovation for its prototype development. | Fix all grammatical errors: For example, if the manufacturing company did not earn profit in the market, then in order to reduce the cost and prevent the loss from getting worse, the manufacturing company has to stop funding the innovators for their prototypes development. |
30 | gec | Then the innovators have to stop all work for the development. | # Then, the innovators must stop all work for the advancement of the technology. | # Then, the innovators must stop all work for the advancement of the technology. | Update to remove grammar errors: Then the innovators have to stop all works for the development. |
31 | gec | This shows that manufacturing companies are trying to reduce the unnecessary burden to maintain the companies' stand. | The manufacturing companies have tried to reduce their unnecessary burden on the companies to maintain their stand. | The manufacturing companies have tried to reduce their unnecessary burden on the companies to maintain their stand. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: This shows that the manufacturing companies are trying to reduce the unnecessary burden to maintain the companies' stand. |
32 | gec | Therefore, this is one of the major factors that will definitely affect innovators from developing innovative products. | The main factor that will affect the innovation from developing innovative products is the development of innovation. | The main factor that will affect the innovation from developing innovative products is this one. Therefore, the innovation products will definitely be developed in this way. | Improve the grammaticality: Therefore, this is one of the major factors that will definitely affect the innovators from developing innovation products. |
33 | gec | For example, the marketing department thinks that the new products are not relevant to what the company is selling. | # for example, marketing departments think that the innovations in the products do not have a relevance to the company's selling. | # for example, marketing departments think that the innovations in the products do not have a relevance to the company's selling. | Fix errors in this text: For example, the marketing department thinks that the innovated products are not relevant to what the company is selling. |
34 | gec | They have to obtain funds from investors in order to develop their innovation prototypes and require help from the marketing department to have their innovative products for sale in the marketplace. | This has to be the case because they have to acquire funding from the investment committee in order for their innovation prototype to be developed and required to have help from marketing departments to have the innovative products for sale in the market. | The entrepreneurs have to acquire funding from the investment committee in order for their innovation prototype to be developed and required for sale in the market. | Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: They have to obtain fund from the investors in order to develop their innovation prototypes and require help from the marketing department to have their innovation products for sales in the marketplace. |
35 | gec | Engineering design is defined as a process that brings ideas or theories into physical representations which satisfy human needs. | In engineering design, the process of coming up with an idea or a theory into a physical representation which satisfies the human needs is called engineering design. | In engineering design, the process of coming up with an idea or a theory into a physical representation which satisfies the human needs is called engineering design. | Make the sentence fluent: Engineering design is defined as a process that brings ideas or theories into physical representations which satisfies human needs. |
36 | gec | Because engineering designs are always related to real problems, during the five processes, the obstacles they face are more than theories and calculations on paper. | The engineering design process involves real problems, during which engineers face obstacles that are related to the theory and calculations, on paper, and in the real world. | The engineering design process involves real problems, during which engineers face obstacles that are related to the theory and calculations, on paper, and in the real world. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Because Engineering designs are always related to real problem, during the five processes, the obstacles they face are more than theories and calculations on paper. |
37 | gec | Political issues usually become relevant in the beginning and final steps, especially in the last step. | # Political issues often become realized at the beginning, and the final step is usually the last one. | # Political issues often become realized at the beginning, and the final step is usually the last. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: Political issues usually become realized in the beginning and final steps, especially in the last step. |
38 | gec | In the last step of design, political issues can also disrupt the process significantly. | The last step in the design process is political issues, also disturbing the process. | The last step in the design process is political issues, also disturbing the process. | Fix grammatical errors: In the last step of design, political issues also disturb the process significantly. |
39 | gec | However, after the design had been carried out for a few weeks, it was stopped. | #However, when it was carried out, it had been stopped. | #However, when it was carried out, it had been stopped for several weeks. | Make the sentence fluent: However, when the design had been carried out for a few weeks, it was stopped. |
40 | gec | In this example, there is nothing wrong with the original design work, but the design still cannot be carried out due to political inconsistency between the city government and higher-level authorities. | This example, in this case, is not wrong, but it is still not the right design work. However, the design is still unable to be completed due to the political inconsistency between the City Government and the Higher Level Authorities. | This example, in this case, is not wrong, but it is still not the right design work. However, the design is still unable to be completed due to the political inconsistency between the City Government and the Higher Level Authorities. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In this example, there is nothing wrong with the original design work, but the design still cannot be carried out due to political inconsistent between the city government and higher level authorities. |
41 | gec | It affects the analyzing and the test step most seriously though it can affect almost every step of design work. | The analysis and testing step is most seriously affected by it. It can affect nearly every step in the design process. | The analysis and testing step is most seriously affected by it. It can affect nearly every step in the design process. | Fix grammaticality: It affects the analyzing and test step most seriously though it can affect almost every step of design work. |
42 | gec | Besides, the lack of financial support or sudden stop in the financial support may even lead to the incompletion of a project. | # Besides, a lack of funding or sudden stops in financial support could even lead the project to be incomplete. | # Besides, a lack of funding or sudden stops in financial support could even lead the project to be incomplete or incomplete. | Fix grammatical errors: Besides, the lack of financial support or sudden stop in the financial support may even lead to the incomplete of a project. |
43 | gec | Humankind always has needs and demands because people want to lead a more comfortable and easier life. | The human needs and wants always have a need and demand. Because people want more comfortable, easier, and easier lives. | The human needs and wants always have a need and demand. Because people want more comfortable, easier, and easier lives. | Grammar improvements: Humankind always has needs and demands because people want to lead more comfortable and easier life. |
44 | gec | There are various fields in which engineering plays an important role in our daily lives, such as entertainment, healthcare, transportation, real estate, and so on. | The various fields in which engineering is an important part of our lives are entertainment, health care, transport, and the real estate. | In the field of engineering, there are various areas that engineering helps to play an important part in our lives. For example, entertainment, health care, and transportation are some of the fields that engineering can play a role in. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: There are various fields which engineering plays an important role in our daily lives, such as entertainment, healthcare, transportation, real estate, and so on. |
45 | gec | The cost of raw materials has risen significantly from the year 2003 to the year 2009, and it has affected the electronics supply chain. | #The cost of the raw materials have risen significantly since the year of 1903 and it is affecting the electronic supply chain | The cost of the raw materials have risen significantly since the year of 2,000, and it is affecting the electronic supply chain in a significant way. | Improve the grammaticality: The cost of raw materials has risen significantly from the year 2003 to year 2009 and it has affected the electronics supply chain. |
46 | gec | Hence designs that need a large amount of gold may not be feasible. | # Hence, designs that require large amounts of gold should not be viable. | # Hence, designs that require large amounts of gold should not be viable. | Make the sentence grammatical: Hence designs that need large amount of gold may not be feasible. |
47 | gec | However, if the engineers are to stick to their original design, the cost of the end product will be high. | #However, if engineers had to stick with their original designs, they would have to spend a lot of money on the end products. | #However, if engineers had to stick with their original designs, they would have to spend a lot of money on the final product. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, if the engineers were to stick to their original design, the cost of the end product will be high. |
48 | gec | Hazardous products can tarnish the reputation of the company and sometimes even result in the loss of innocent lives. | The hazardous product tarnishes the company's reputation, and sometimes, even results in the death of innocent people. | The hazardous product tarnishes the company's reputation, and sometimes, even results in the death of innocent people. | Update to remove grammar errors: Hazardous product can tarnish the reputation of the company and sometimes even result in the loss of innocent lives. |
49 | gec | Thus it is very important for engineers to do repeated trial tests of the product to ensure that it is free of faults. | # Thus, it is extremely important that engineers do repeated trials test the product before it is released to the public. | # Thus, it is extremely important that engineers do repeated trials test the product before it is released to the public. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Thus it is very important for engineers to do repeated trial test of the product to ensure that it is free of faults. |
50 | gec | As we understand the relevance and importance of engineering design, we will come to realize that, in reality, there are several factors that prevent the progress of engineering design. | In reality, there are many factors that prevent engineering design from progressing. | In reality, there are many factors that prevent engineering design from progressing. | Fix grammatical errors: As we understand the relevance and importance of engineering design, we will come to realize that in reality there are several factors that preventing the progress of engineering design. |
51 | gec | In Singapore, there is a certain fixed amount in the country's national budget allocated to the research and development sector. | This sentence is in Singapore's National budget allocated for the research, development, and innovation sector. | This sentence is in Singapore, and it is only the fixed amount allocated in the national budget. | Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In Singapore, there is only a certain fixed amount in the country's national budget allocated of the research and development sector. |
52 | gec | Some feel that in these tough economic times, it is wiser to spend the money on restructuring the economy or providing more incentives to encourage entrepreneurship rather than investing in research in engineering design. | The feeling is that some feel that the tough economic times, which have been going on for a long time, are wiser to spend money on the restructuring of the economy rather than providing incentives to encourage entrepreneurship, instead of investing in the research in the engineering design field. | The feeling is that some feel that the tough economic times, which are inevitable, should be wiser to invest in research and engineering design instead of investing in the restructuring of the economy. | Remove grammatical mistakes: Some feel that in these tough economical times, it is wiser to splurge the money on restructuring the economy or providing more incentives to instill entrepreneurship, rather than investing in research in engineering design. |
53 | gec | Secondly, the number of creative people in Singapore is small, which may be a major reason for the hampering of innovative engineering design. | The amount of creativity in Singapore, which is a small number, is a major factor for hampering the innovation of engineering design in the country. | The amount of creativity in Singapore, which is a small number, is a major factor for hampering the innovation of engineering design in the country. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Secondly, the amount of creative people in Singapore is small, which may be a major reason for the hampering of innovative engineering design. |
54 | gec | The population of Singapore is small compared to other countries in the region. | In comparison to other regions in the world, Singapore has a limited population. | In comparison to other regions in the world, Singapore has a limited population. | Fix grammatical errors: The population of Singapore is scarce compared to other countries in the region. |
55 | gec | The impact of having a limited number of creative people has resulted in Singapore having to resort to buying foreign-based engineering design equipment from overseas. | The impact of having limited creative people in Singapore has resulted, in the case of the design of engineering equipment from abroad, to the use of foreign engineering designs. | The impact of having limited creative people in Singapore has resulted, in the case of the design of engineering equipment from abroad, to the use of foreign engineering designs. | Grammar improvements: The impact on having a limited amount of creative people has resulted in Singapore having to resort to buying foreign-based engineering design equipment from overseas. |
56 | gec | However, the 3 M researchers found that this failed bonding agent was suitable for attaching notes which satisfied many people's needs. | The 3M researchers found this failed bond agent is suitable for bonding notes which satisfies many people' needs. | The 3M researchers found this failure bonding agent is suitable for the attaching notes that satisfy many needs. | Improve the grammar of this text: However, the 3 M researchers found out this failed bonding agent was suitable for attaching notes which satisfy many people's needs. |
57 | gec | Thus the post-it note was invented from this idea. | # Thus, post-its were invented from the idea of this idea | # Thus, post-its have been invented from the idea of this post-illustration. | Fix grammar in the sentence: Thus post-it note was invented from this idea. |
58 | gec | In this manner, many other serendipitous technologies have been discovered and have solved many problems. | The sentence above is a good example of how serendipitous discoveries and solutions have been solved many unrelated problems. | The sentence above is a good example of how serendipitous discoveries and solutions have been solved many unrelated problems. | Make the sentence fluent: In this manner, many other serendipitous technologies have been discovered and solved many irrelevant problems. |
59 | gec | Thus, it is fair to say that both conventional technology and serendipitous technology are stimulated by the realization of problems and needs. | # Thus, both conventional technologies and serendipitous technologies are stimulated by realizing problems and need. | # Thus, both conventional technologies and serendipitous technologies are stimulated by realizing problems and need. | Remove grammar mistakes: Thus, it is fair to say that either conventional technology or serendipitous technology is stimulated by the realization of problems and needs. |
60 | gec | If the refrigerator had remained as it was invented in the 1910s and no further development had been made to improve its quality, the refrigerator would just be an unsuccessful invention due to its low efficiency and high cost. | If the refrigerator were still as it is invented in the 20th century, no further improvements have been made in its efficiency, and the cost would be much lower. | If the refrigerator were still as it is invented in the early 20th century, no further improvements would have been made in its quality. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: If the refrigerator was remained as it was invented in 1910s and no further development has been made to improve its quality, the refrigerator would just be an unsuccessful invention due to its low efficiency and high cost. |
61 | gec | How other people get to know about your products and are convinced to use them. | The other people who have been persuaded to use your products. | The other people who have been persuaded to use your products have gotten to know you and have convinced them to use you. | Fix grammar in the sentence: How other people get to know your products and been convinced to use them. |
62 | gec | From these two examples, it is clear that another similarity between conventional technology and serendipitous technology is the process of development and commercialization which involve a lot of hard work. | # From these examples, it can be seen that other similarities between conventional technologies and the serendipitous technologies are the processes of development, commercialization, and the hard work involved in the process. | # From these examples, it can be seen that other similarities between conventional technologies and the serendipitous technologies are the processes of development, commercialization, and the hard work involved in the process. | Remove grammar mistakes: From these two examples above, it is clear that another similarity between conventional technology and serendipitous technology is the process of development and commercialization which involved a lot of hard work. |
63 | gec | Research is usually based in certain organizations, and it requires some time, funds, and resources before the researchers can finally obtain the expected results. | In research, it usually requires a certain organization and it needs some time and funds before the research can finally be obtained. | In research, it usually requires a certain organization and it needs some time and funds before the research can finally be obtained. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Research is usually based on certain organizations and it requires some time, funds and resources before the researchers can finally obtain the expected results. |
64 | gec | This is, in fact, not encouraged by the traditional philosophy of Chinese people. | # This is not encouraged from the traditional Chinese idea of the people. | The traditional idea is that Chinese people are not encouraged to do things like this. | Fix all grammatical errors: This is, in fact, not encouraged by the traditional idea of Chinese people. |
65 | gec | Thus, I believe these problems obstructing engineering innovation will be solved in the near future. | #I believe that these problems will obstruct engineering innovation, and will eventually be solved by the next generation of engineers. | #I believe that these problems will obstruct engineering innovation, and will eventually be solved by the next generation of engineers. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: I believe these problems obstructing engineering innovation will be solved in the near future. |
66 | gec | Understanding the differences and similarities between such a path that inventors take and conventionally generated technologies will help us to better appreciate their efforts & the hardships they have to go through in their endeavors. | The understanding of the differences & similarities between these paths that inventors have taken and conventional technologies will also help us better appreciate the efforts and hardships they have had to endure in their endeavors. | The understanding of the differences & similarities between these paths that inventors have taken and conventional technologies will also help us better appreciate the efforts and hardships they have had to endure in their endeavors. | Grammar improvements: Understanding the differences and similarities between such a path that inventors take and conventionally generated technologies will help us to better appreciate their efforts & the hardships they had to go through in their endeavours. |
67 | gec | These planes are a mark of development not only in speed but also in agility. | # These planes, not only are a marker of development, but also, in agility, in speed. | # These planes do not only mark the development of speed, but also the agility of the aircraft. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence: These planes are not only a mark of development in speed but also in agility. |
68 | gec | Most importantly, we see that the needs of the military were a driving force behind the development and enhancement of the aircraft. | The most important need for the military was the need for a vehicle that could be used to transport people and goods. | The most important motivation behind this development was the need for the military to be able to provide the necessary support for the aging population. | Fix grammatical errors: Most importantly, we see that these needs of the military were a driving force behind the development and enhancement of the aircraft. |
69 | gec | Secondly, social factors have guided the growth of planes. | The second factor was social factors. | The second factor was social factors. Second, the social factors helped to grow the planes. | Fix the grammatical mistakes: Secondly, social factors guided the growth of planes. |
70 | gec | It is noticeable that the size of commercial planes has increased over the years in response to the rise in global travelers. | # It is noticed that the commercial planes have increased in size over time in response to the rising global traveler's demand. | # It is noticed that the commercial planes have increased in size over time in response to the rising global traveler's demand. | Fix grammar in the sentence: It is noticeable that the size of commercial planes increased over the years in the response to meet the rise in global travelers. |
71 | gec | These modifications would indeed not have been possible if not for the varying social as well as military requirements during different eras. | The modifications were actually not possible without the varied social and military requirements of different eras during different periods. | The modifications were actually not possible without the varied social and military requirements of different eras during different periods. | Fix grammar errors: These modifications were indeed not possible if not for the varying social as well as military requirements during different eras. |
72 | gec | When there is a need for something, technology is created to solve the problem. | The need for a technology to solve a problem is when there is no need for anything else. | The need for a technology to solve a problem is when there is no need for anything else. | Fix errors in this text: When there is a need for something, a technology is create to solve the problem. |
73 | gec | This implied that automobile companies had to pull in large sums of money for research and development work to create and promote the sales of such cars. | The implication is that automobile manufacturers had to draw a large sum of money to research and develop the sales and promotion of these cars. | The implication is that automobile manufacturers had to draw a large sum of money to research and develop the sales and promotion of these cars. | Improve the grammaticality: This implies that automobile companies had to pull in large sums of money for research and development work to create and promote the sales of such cars. |
74 | gec | However, the cost to finance this project will be high as much research and development have to be done. | # However, the cost of this project is high, as much work has to be performed. | # However, the cost of this project is high, as much work has to be performed. | Fix grammar in the sentence: However the cost to finance this project will be high as much research and development have to be done. |
75 | gec | As mentioned, the Inconvenient Truth has shown that there is a direct link between carbon emissions and the rising temperatures of the earth. | Inconvenience Truth has demonstrated that the carbon emissions are directly linked to the rising temperature of the earth. | This inconvenience truth has showed that the rise in the temperatures of Earth is directly linked to the rising levels of carbon emissions. | Fix grammaticality: As mentioned, the Inconvenient Truth has shown that there is a direct link between carbon emissions and the rising temperatures of the Earth. |
76 | gec | There are many alternative sources of energy that can be used and applied in our life, such as solar energy, light energy, wind energy, water power, and so on. | This sentence is correct, but there are many alternative sources of energy that can be applied and used in our daily lives, and these sources are solar, light, wind, water, and so forth. | This sentence is correct, but there are many alternative sources of energy that can be applied and used in our daily lives, and these sources are such as sunlight, light, wind, water, and so forth. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: There many alternative source of energy can be used and applied in our life, such as solar energy, light energy, wind energy, water power and so on. |
77 | gec | The world in the 21st century is faced with the severe problem of global energy shortage. | # 20th century is facing a severe shortage of energy. | # 20th century is facing a severe shortage of energy. | Fix grammar: The 21st century is faced with a severe problem of global energy shortage. |
78 | gec | However, the rate of energy consumption by humans is much higher than what nature is able to produce. | # The rate at which energy is consumed by humans is much, higher than that of what nature can produce. | # The rate at which energy is consumed by humans is much, higher than that of what nature can produce. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The rate of energy consumption by human is much higher than what nature is able to produce. |
79 | gec | Therefore, the last decade has witnessed increasing energy prices due to an insufficient supply of energy. | The last decade, has witnessed an increase in energy prices due to inadequate supply of electricity. | The last decade, has witnessed an increase in energy prices due to inadequate supply of electricity. | Fix grammar: Therefore, the last decade has witnessed the increasing energy price due to insufficient supply of energy. |
80 | gec | In response to energy shortage, engineers are designing more efficient products and systems. | In response to the energy shortage caused by the shortage of fossil fuels, engineers develop more energy-efficient products and system. | In response to the energy shortage caused by the shortage of fossil fuels, engineers develop more energy-efficient products and system. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In response to energy shortage, engineers design more efficient products and systems. |
81 | gec | Natural movements such as the tide, the wind, and the waves can all be used for generating power. | # Natural movements, such as the tides, wind, and wave, can be used to generate power. | # Natural movements, such as the tides, wind, and wave, can be used to generate power. | Fix grammar in this sentence: Natural movements such as tide, wind and wave can all be used for generating power. |
82 | gec | This shows that nuclear power may gradually replace traditional oil and petroleum. | The nuclear power plant shows that it may gradually be replaced by traditional oil, petroleum, and natural gas. | The nuclear power plant shows that it may gradually be replaced by traditional oil, petroleum, and natural gas. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence: It shows that nuclear power may gradually replace traditional oil and petroleum. |
83 | gec | Although it seems very optimistic that many potential alternative energy resources can be found, there are, in fact, other economic and social constraints faced by engineers. | The optimistic outlook for many potential alternatives energy resources may be seen as a very optimistic one, but there are also other economic, social, and other constrains that face engineers. | The optimistic outlook for many potential alternatives energy resources may be seen as a very optimistic one, but there are also other economic, social, and other constrains that face engineers. | Fix errors in this text: Although it seems very optimistic that many potential alternative energy resources can be found, there are, in fact, other economic and social constrains faced by engineers. |
84 | gec | To conclude, engineering design processes can be applied to help solve the current problem of global energy shortage. | In conclusion, the engineering design problem can be solved using the process of the design process. | In conclusion, the engineering design problem can be solved using the process of the design process. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence: To conclude, engineering design process can be applied to help solve the current problem of global energy shortage. |
85 | gec | Technologies are usually developed to cater to certain needs of people, whether to provide better methods of doing things or to develop tools that facilitate working and living. | The technologies are constantly developed to meet the needs of the people, regardless of whether they are for providing better methods for doing things, or for developing tools that allow working and life. | The technologies are constantly developed to meet the needs of the people, regardless of whether they are for providing better methods for doing things, or for developing tools to facilitate working. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Technologies are always developed to cater certain needs of people, whether to provide better methods of doing things or to develop tools that facilitate working and living. |
86 | gec | Virtual technology was designed with a series of unique properties to address the observed social needs by engaging a large user population. | In virtual technology, the unique properties of virtual technology have been designed to address social needs of the observed population. | In virtual technology, the unique properties of virtual technology have been designed to address social needs of the observed population. | Fix grammar: Virtual technology has been designed with a series of unique properties to address the observed social needs by engaging a large user population. |
87 | gec | New technologies have made people realize the underlying economic opportunities beyond geographic barriers and national boundaries. | In the new technologies, people realized that underlying economic benefits beyond geographic boundaries and national borders. | In the new technologies, people realized that underlying economic benefits beyond geographic boundaries and national borders. | Improve the grammaticality of this text: New technologies had made people realize the underlying economic opportunities beyond geographic barriers and national boundaries. |
88 | gec | Catering to this need, a series of solutions have been developed based on virtual technology. | # Catering for this need is the result of this need. | This need has been addressed by a number of solutions, such as virtual technology, which has helped to cater to this demand. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Catering to this need, a series of solutions has been developed based on virtual technology. |
89 | gec | Apart from the demands from business and education, other factors have also shaped the development of virtual technology, and solutions have been designed to meet these needs. | The demands from businesses and education have also had a significant impact on the development and design of virtual technologies and solutions. Other factors, such as the demands of business and the needs of education, have also contributed to the growth of virtual solutions. | The demands from businesses and education have also had a significant impact on the development and design of virtual technologies and solutions. Other factors, such as the demands of business and the needs of education, have also contributed to the growth of virtual solutions. | Grammar improvements: Apart from the demands from business and education, other factors have also shaped the development of virtual technology and solutions have been designed to meet the needs. |
90 | gec | Thus, the development of virtual technology has been shaped by social factors such as the business environment, educational needs, and military demands. | In the development of the virtual technology, social factors are shaped by the business, educational, and military needs. | The development of technology has shaped the development of the virtual technology. | Fix grammaticality: The development of virtual technology is shaped by social factors such as the business environment, educational needs and military demands. |
91 | gec | However, problems inevitably arise and affect the process of innovation due to improper strategies or methods. | The problems generated by the improper strategy or methods inevitably generate problems for the innovation process. | The problems generated by the improper strategy or methods eventually generate problems that affect the innovation process. | Fix grammar errors: However, problems inevitably generate and affect the process of innovation due to the improper strategies or methods. |
92 | gec | In other words, these designs are produced without adequate market survey, so they turn out to be unwelcomed by the public. | The designs are not produced without a proper market survey. So, they are turned out unwelcome among the public. | This design is produced without a proper market survey; so it turns out to turn out unwelcome among the public. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In other words, these designs are produced without adequate market survey, so they turn out to be unwelcomed among public. |
93 | gec | Though the designs are products of fantastic conception, they become useless like rubbish once booted out of the market. | #Though the design is fantastic, it becomes useless as a rubbish when it out of the market. | This design is a fantastic concept, but it becomes useless as soon as it out of the market. | Fix grammar: Though the designs are products of fantastic conception, they become useless as rubbish once out of market. |
94 | gec | After China adopted the policy of reform and opening up, the Chinese government has long been encouraging people to make varieties of innovations. | The policy of reforming and opening up has been long-standing in China's government, and people have long been encouraged to make innovations. | The policy of reforming and opening up has been long-standing in China's government, and people have long been encouraged to make innovations. | Fix grammar errors in this sentence: After the policy of reform and opening-up, Chinese government has long been encouraging people to make varieties of innovations. |
95 | gec | As long as the application documents meet the required format, the patent will be approved. | The application documents will be reviewed and approved by the patent application process. | The application documents will be reviewed and approved by the patent office. | Fix errors in this text: As long as the application documents meet the format, the patent will be approved. |
96 | gec | Normally patent infringement lawsuits can be settled out of court due to the high cost and complicated procedures. | The normally lawsuits of a patent infringement are usually settled out-of-court due to high costs and complex procedures. | The normally lawsuits of a patent infringement are usually settled out-of-court due to high costs and complex procedures. | Update to remove grammar errors: Normally the lawsuits of patent infringement can be settled out of court due to the high cost and complicated procedures. |
97 | gec | As a developing country, China is now facing problems in many fields. | The development of China now, now, is facing a number of problems. | The development of China now, now, is facing a number of problems. | Improve the grammar of this text: As a developing country, now China is facing problems on many fields. |
98 | gec | China's education is a typical exam-oriented education. | The education system in China is typical of an exam-orientation education. | The education system in China is typical of an exam-orientation education. | Remove grammatical mistakes: China's education is typical exam-oriented education. |
99 | gec | However, the policy of engineering and industry cannot meet these needs. | #However, the policies of the engineering and industrial sectors do not match the needs of the society. | #However, the policies of the engineering and industrial sectors do not match the needs of the society. | Fix grammar errors in this sentence: However, the policy of engineering and industry cannot meet the needs. |
100 | gec | In the technological age, since independent innovation is very important to a nation's development, society needs people with innovative talent. | The technological age has been very important in the development of society, and the people need the individuals with innovative talents. | The technological age has been very important in the development of society, and the people need the individuals with innovative talents. | Fix grammar: In the technological age, since independent innovation is very important to a nation's development, society needs the people with innovative talent. |