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NASA whats to get information about Venus.
Claim
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Anuther way to resive infromation is by sending elatronics to Venus.
Claim
Ineffective
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One day we will have the limets to go in Venus. NASA has not gavie up Venus. Venus is valuble to us not olny because it's just a nuther resuers but because it will let us have the lemits to explore other plants. I do balive that we should know other plants. We shouled tot be limited with awer inmagination.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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To coincide with the theme of change and growth summer promotes, students should have the ability to choose their own projects, to further their educational experience and mental development, without the influence of a teacher.
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The ability for students to choose their own summer projects would enhance their outlook on education,because they would study topics that interest them,and not teacher selected topics that would seem like a task.
Claim
Effective
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Many teachers would argue that a student designed summer project would lack information or seem to rushed.
Counterclaim
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If students were able to create their own summer projects, the result would be a more creative,responsible and independent thinking person
Claim
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Teacher designed projects allow no room for creativity nor responsibility because there are guidelines and an examples set in place by the teacher,students have to follow. Thus, resulting in one hundred or more projects that all sound the same and lack any indication of the student's voice.
Evidence
Adequate
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Teachers would argue that summer projects must be designed by them, so that all students are able to receive full credit.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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Which is great in theory,but not in the long run. It does not benefit the student to have a guideline or rubric, it only benefits the teacher because the projects would be easier to grade.
Rebuttal
Effective
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The cost and risk of exploring Venus is not worth the infromation we would achieve.
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Venus has a enviorment of very dangerous elements that can harm many living organisms and even nonliving objects
Claim
Adequate
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According to the article, 97 percent of the atmosphere of Venus is carbon dioxide, which is unable to be breathed by humans. Another detail the article states is that on the surface of the planet, the average temperatures is over eight hundred degrees. The climate and enviorment of Venus is too dangerous for exploration. The planet does not hold nowhere near a safe enviorment for people or even machine.
Evidence
Effective
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Another detail about Venus is that no spacecfaft has made a journey back from the planet.
Claim
Adequate
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NASA has came up with a ¨solution¨ of the problemof gaining knowledge of Venus which is for a vehicle to hover over Venus and scientists would safely observe the planet that way.
Counterclaim
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However, the article says that this can only give us a limited amount of information on Venus since the planet has a very dense atmosphere. The effort of creating a vehicle to hover the planet only to gain bits of knowledge is redundant and is not going the benefit anyone´s cause.
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Venus is not worth the time, effort and resources to explore. The planet proves to be too dangerous for mankind and even for machines. Curiosity is not sufficiant enough of a reason to explore and learn about a inhospitable planet unless it is going to benefit mankind more than what it costed to gain that information. The resources that are going to Venus should be redirected to another cause that will benefit society and life as we know it.
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The new technology it was created by, what does it do,is it a good thing.
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I think we should use the new technology in classroom
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because I think I will become dectration to kids because they will want to play with it to see her they feel. This type of technology should be use for treapist to help read patient when they are talk about their life so the treapist know how they felt about that part in there life.
Claim
Ineffective
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The use of this technology for a classroom full of students will not be valuable.
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Although it would be interesting to see what the students are feeling during a lesson.
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How is the data going to be of use in science?
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The students can express their feelings, but what are the researchers going to do with this information.
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This technology should be used, but not in the classroom.
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If we do end up using the system to detect emotions where will the data go.
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It will help the video game industry with the evidence from paragraph 6 "The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery."
Evidence
Ineffective
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Why only put this into a classroom put it into the robots we are building today so they seem more human-like, so they can become more advanced than a ordinary robot
Evidence
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The direction the researchers are taking are great, but the choice of where to put it needs to be different. Just putting it into a classroom would be a waste of time and money.
Claim
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The way that the researchers are using it for is inefficient and wasteful and should not be implemented in classrooms.
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so you want to take all the cars out of the city ok cool
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this will save the pepol like 1,000,000 dolers a year
Claim
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reduce polution
Claim
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i gess its a good idea but on the other hand nah i mean lookif pepal want to ruin the world with gas thats there choce man
Counterclaim
Ineffective
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the eirth is cool so why distroit with gasis or something
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" your principle has decided that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity". How would you feel if your principle has made this decision?, and would you agree with this or disagree?.
Lead
Adequate
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I feel as though, the principle has made the right desicion.
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I agree with this desicion because, this desicion could do everyone some good.
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Doing some type of sport or even working on the school news paper could be fun. It would be expecially good for parents. Why? you might ask because, the students won't come home as early, and the parents will have time to run erin's and get some stuff done before their children get home. The parents will also be able to just have more time to their selves.
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Adequate
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this could be helpful to the children mentally and physically.
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Overall, students should build more life skills and social skills, and adding extracurricular activity's to the students day can help with that.
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building life skills at a younger age can be great so, when you get out into the world you'll atleast know some key factors to living. Building social skills is great too. Lets say you get a job in marketing, you need to be social, have great speech, and be outgoing. In fact, you need social skills for any job. The principle making the desicion to add an extracurricular activity's to students day at school was and great idea.
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Adequate
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adding an extracurricular activity to all of the student body would be an great idea because, it could be benifial to students, parents. and teachers. Building social skills. Life skills, and just being productive has all to do with adding an extracurricular activity to a students day.
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In the article they are talking about a new technology called Facial Action Coding System where the computer can identify human emotions.
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I think that this new technology can be very valuable for teachers in schools to know when a student is sad or upset.
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The computer can help a teacher/adult to understand when a student is in need of a talk or needs to express their emotions
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This is also very valuable because it could potentially save a life in bad situations.
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This system can alert a teacher or anyone when there might be something wrong with a person, whether it is good or bad.
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To be able to understand how a person feels may be one of the best new technologies created. Knowing when a person is feeling sad, angry, happy, etc, can really be great for if they need someone to talk to. It could make things better or make things not so good. Just having those options of emotions to be recognized is something very amazing. Even though this system can't contol your emotions or thoughts, it can really help to understand when there is something good or bad going on.
Evidence
Adequate
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I think another use for this could be in hospitals to detect if a patient is lying about their emotions.
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Even though a patient in a hospital may not like this because it can see their true emotions, it might be able to help them in the long run. If this technology can help manage what another person is feeling then it can make them see whats really going on, even if they lie about it.
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Is getting emotional facial recognization the best way to go with technology? Computers are getting smarter and it doesn't sound like it will be slowing down any time soon. When scientests and computer programers combine it can be a beautiful thing. Scientests are developing better ways for humans and computers to comunicate. With new encoding and development of software scientests have now created a way for a computer to tell how someone is feeling by using their facial muscles.
Lead
Adequate
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The new programing will be a positive thing,
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Adequate
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muscles in the face just act naturally
Claim
Ineffective
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0
39
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the encoding is complex
Claim
Ineffective
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24
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the new technology could be coming to local classrooms.
Claim
Adequate
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56
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The Scientests have a whole process.
Claim
Ineffective
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With the new technology comes new computers.
Claim
Adequate
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0
45
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9976121187210083 } ]
994
9af8a9ea55eb
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The emotional facial reading could be coming to a local schools.
Claim
Adequate
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65
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9929425716400146 } ]
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The new technology would be able to tell if a student was bored, or if they got confused. Then the computer could modify the lesson for the student to help them learn better. The technology could act like an effective human instructor. Must human communication is nonverbal. Emotional communication is also nonverbal. The studesnts could improve with one on one lesson plans. The studensts could also work at their own pace and have their own personal plans.
Evidence
Adequate
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All the technology needs to understand how to read and comunicate with a human through facial features. The anatomy of a human is complex and hard to understand and encode into computers. The new programing will be a positive thing, muscles in the face just act naturally, the encoding is complex, and the new technology could be coming to local classrooms. Scientests are hard at work trying to make the new technology common and natural for everyone to use.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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I stand with the principle on his decision
Position
Adequate
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0
43
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I believe that participating in extracurricular activities has many benefits on a child's social life
Claim
Effective
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102
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Making friends while on a team or a club will be much easier, the students will have connections with others, and everyone will have something to talk about. Some students may find it hard to make friends, but by being in an extracurricular activity, there are many chances to find a long lasting pal.
Evidence
Effective
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You may think, "It's nice that the students can find a friend, but what if there is nothing they would like or want to participate in?"
Counterclaim
Effective
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136
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Well, i'm sure there is something they would enjoy, because there are many options
Rebuttal
Effective
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Extracurricular activities can also help shape students into better citizens.
Claim
Effective
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asking students to participate in at least one extracurricular activity is a good idea. I believe that students school and social life will change for the better. It may take some time to see the positive effects that this new rule will have on the school, but there will definitely be a huge, great difference within the school's community.  
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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346
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Having good guidelines and being told what the expectations are will give students a better chance at success.
Lead
Ineffective
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Summer projects should be teacher-designed
Position
Adequate
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43
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because the rules and expectations act as a rubric for students to follow,
Claim
Adequate
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75
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as well as making sure the project is acceptable to the teachers requirements.
Claim
Adequate
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Giving student guidelines are very helpful in getting the project done.
Claim
Adequate
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72
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Most classes follow a curriculum schedule that the teacher need to follow. Without the teacher giving the project the student might not learn the things required or not learn enough for the curriculum. When I had an online class my online teacher was very good. She provided me with enough guidelines that I was able to learn the material needed for me to pass the class. Having the teacher design the project will make sure that the student learns the material required for the curriculum.
Evidence
Effective
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With a teacher-designed project the rules and expectations act as a rubric for students to follow, as well as making sure the project is acceptable to the teachers requirements.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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178
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If the project was to be designed by the students, there are too many easy ways out.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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85
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Students can not give themselves the material needed to pass and some students could give themselves projects that are under the expected requirements of the teacher.
Evidence
Adequate
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167
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Having a teacher design the project gives the teacher the ability to assure the student is learning what is expected of them.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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126
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If my principal ever decided to make students participate in an extracurricular activity, I would agree with their decision. Joining certain extracurricular activities can bring many benefits to students' lives and open up more opportunities for them in the future. Think about all the things you could learn through extracurricular activities.
Position
Effective
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345
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Extracurricular activities can help students with things like building new and helpful experiences, preparing for the future
Claim
Adequate
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0
125
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discovering more about their interests
Claim
Ineffective
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0
39
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9936752915382385 } ]
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socializing with their peers.
Claim
Ineffective
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0
30
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9977545142173767 } ]
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Joining a certain group for an extracurricular activity can help you make experiences that can open up different pathways for you in the future.
Claim
Effective
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0
145
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If you decided to join in on an activity that you can participate in as an extracurricular, it might help you discover what you enjoy doing
Claim
Adequate
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0
140
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9988417029380798 } ]
1,026
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Participating in things like clubs, sports teams, or student council gives students the opportunity to meet new people and branch out.
Claim
Adequate
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135
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Cars have always been apart of American culture. From the "...birth place of the Model T; the home of Detroit; the place where Wilson Pickett immortalized "'Mustang Sally'"(The End of Car Culture, Rosenthal) Cars and automobils have impacted our everyday lifes from going to the store to hanging out with friends, but car usage has been stedily decreesing and for all the right reasons.
Lead
Effective
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387
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1,031
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A new movemnent is trending everywhere, it's called "smart planning". It's simple, separate subarban life from auto use.
Evidence
Effective
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In doing so this movement is going to help out the econdomy and also the enviorment.
Claim
Adequate
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85
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The infamous smog is not only in Bejing, or the United States, but also in The City of Love. "Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals...[Last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London..." (Paragraph 17, Duffer) The city is not so lovely as you'd think it would be, but the trend has cought on in Paris!
Evidence
Effective
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Not only that but it also has been great for the enviorment.
Claim
Adequate
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Just one day a week could cut down smog and other green house gasses a lot and help our enviroment and the edodomey.
Claim
Effective
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you could to this to stop in increes of smog in our enviorment and even help with traffic jams. And without traffic jams eveyone is less stressed out and a lot more happier.
Claim
Adequate
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By not using our cars as much, we can help ourselves and everyone aroud us by making a better world that makes it better for our children, or even our childrens' children.
Position
Effective
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We can save money by just taking one day off of not driving. We should limit car use so we can stop car accedents from happening, getting stressed in traffic jams, to helping out the economical heart of the United States, and just to make our world a better place to have fun and thrive in.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Yes I agree that Venus is dangerous place, but scientists are trying to find ways to dicover and learn more about Venus.
Position
Adequate
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121
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Many years ago scientist believed that Venus use to have Oceans and Valleys.
Evidence
Ineffective
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78
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8021388649940491 } ]
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So this shows that Venus is a very hot planet that humans can not live on because of the conditions.
Claim
Adequate
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101
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9796060919761658 } ]
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In Conclusion scientist, spacecraft and the NASA are still trying to see what they can do about traveling to Venus but no one has not beem back since then. This shows that Venus tempature and atmospehere is too bad to live in.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Twenty five years ago something strange happened on mars. People may have heard about "The Face on Mars" and thinked that it was formed by alien life.
Lead
Adequate
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Scientists believed the face was an alien artifact . It actually was not.
Position
Adequate
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74
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