Danitg95/feedback-kaggle-sentiment · Datasets at Hugging Face

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efdcd98a5652	0DEDD9E3222F	This software makes the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused, then it could modify the lessons, like an human	Claim	Adequate	[ "This", "software", "makes", "computer", "could", "recognize", "student", "bored", "confused", "could", "modify", "lessons", "like", "human" ]	0	134	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9966314435005188 } ]	687
705fc0d85749	0DEDD9E3222F	It can indicate the difference between a genuinie smile and a forced one. To finish with some cientifics conclusions and understand better your boddy. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not ont only express emotions, but also may help produce them. A example is when a drama coach tells to his actor carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage because empath might happen when you see someone else expressions.	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "It", "indicate", "difference", "genuinie", "smile", "forced", "one", "To", "finish", "cientifics", "conclusions", "understand", "better", "boddy", "According", "Facial", "Feedback", "Theory", "Emotion", "moving", "facial", "muscles", "ont", "express", "emotions", "also", "may", "help", "produce", "A", "example", "drama", "coach", "tells", "actor", "carefully", "reproduce", "smiling", "frowning", "way", "creating", "emotions", "stage", "empath", "might", "happen", "see", "someone", "else", "expressions" ]	2	498	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9566678404808044 } ]	688
95f0b7da38ab	0DEDD9E3222F	In conclusion a think this is a good idea, because you can problably know when a friend is feeling just looking on his face, so imagic that a software in your computer can know that	Concluding Statement	Adequate	[ "In", "conclusion", "think", "good", "idea", "problably", "know", "friend", "feeling", "looking", "face", "imagic", "software", "computer", "know" ]	1	182	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9976239800453186 } ]	689
b268a5cdbe72	0E424AAB5B39	In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents	Position	Adequate	[ "In", "The", "Challenge", "Exploring", "Venus", "author", "suggests", "studying", "Venus", "worthy", "pursuit", "despite", "dangers", "presents" ]	0	131	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9977352619171143 } ]	691
2a0276ca69cb	0E424AAB5B39	because In the text it states that venus is actually a planet and venus is the second planet from the sun. The text also states that venus is simple to see from a far distant. Finally, it says that numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study in etc. If you look back in paragraph 1& 2 that's where I got all the information from to support my answer.	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "In", "text", "states", "venus", "actually", "planet", "venus", "second", "planet", "sun", "The", "text", "also", "states", "venus", "simple", "see", "far", "distant", "Finally", "says", "numerous", "factors", "contribute", "venus", "reputation", "challenging", "planet", "humans", "study", "etc", "If", "look", "back", "paragraph", "1", "2", "I", "got", "information", "support", "answer" ]	0	401	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9446413516998291 } ]	692
77e0ed938496	0E49EB72AAA4	There are many dangers that come along with studying planets. Along with the dangers, there are also countless benefits to learning more about different planets. In the passage, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author addresses the point that Venus is worth taking a closer look at and focusing on, no matter the dangers it could put one in.	Lead	Effective	[ "There", "many", "dangers", "come", "along", "studying", "planets", "Along", "dangers", "also", "countless", "benefits", "learning", "different", "planets", "In", "passage", "The", "Challenge", "Exploring", "Venus", "author", "addresses", "point", "Venus", "worth", "taking", "closer", "look", "focusing", "matter", "dangers", "could", "put", "one" ]	0	349	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9992161989212036 } ]	694
b00f58b5d941	0E49EB72AAA4	Although many people believe that the author doesn't support this idea well, the author provides researched evidence and past experiences all throughout the passage to support this idea.	Position	Effective	[ "Although", "many", "people", "believe", "author", "support", "idea", "well", "author", "provides", "researched", "evidence", "past", "experiences", "throughout", "passage", "support", "idea" ]	0	187	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9979897737503052 } ]	695
e24a1a6ee50f	0E49EB72AAA4	In, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author includes well researched evidence to support the idea that Venus is worthy of studying further.	Claim	Adequate	[ "In", "The", "Challenge", "Exploring", "Venus", "author", "includes", "well", "researched", "evidence", "support", "idea", "Venus", "worthy", "studying" ]	0	147	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9996901750564575 } ]	696
7b369889decf	0E49EB72AAA4	The also supports his idea of studying Venus depsite the dangers because he includes past experiences that make this idea stronger.	Claim	Effective	[ "The", "also", "supports", "idea", "studying", "Venus", "depsite", "dangers", "includes", "past", "experiences", "make", "idea", "stronger" ]	1	132	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9850494265556335 } ]	698
b526ae19cda4	0E49EB72AAA4	When explaining past explorations to Venus, the author states, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." Facts that have been presented that occured in the past help the author support his idea that there is reasons why people should look into further studying Venus. These past facts present the idea that Venus once looked like Earth did, and if that is true, there are reasons why it should be looked into further.	Evidence	Effective	[ "When", "explaining", "past", "explorations", "Venus", "author", "states", "Long", "ago", "Venus", "probably", "covered", "largely", "oceans", "could", "supported", "various", "forms", "life", "like", "Earth", "Facts", "presented", "occured", "past", "help", "author", "support", "idea", "reasons", "people", "look", "studying", "Venus", "These", "past", "facts", "present", "idea", "Venus", "looked", "like", "Earth", "true", "reasons", "looked" ]	1	500	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9571188688278198 } ]	699
3896374f1a2d	0E49EB72AAA4	Ultimatley, it is understandable why one would believe that it isn't smart to look into studying and experimenting with Venus; however, the examples of the researched facts and past experiences help to support the authors idea that despite the dangers, Venus is worthy of studying. There may be many dangers that come along with studying different planets, but based off the evidence the author provided, Venus has avoidable ways to make it safe to study.	Concluding Statement	Effective	[ "Ultimatley", "understandable", "one", "would", "believe", "smart", "look", "studying", "experimenting", "Venus", "however", "examples", "researched", "facts", "past", "experiences", "help", "support", "authors", "idea", "despite", "dangers", "Venus", "worthy", "studying", "There", "may", "many", "dangers", "come", "along", "studying", "different", "planets", "based", "evidence", "author", "provided", "Venus", "avoidable", "ways", "make", "safe", "study" ]	1	456	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9860917925834656 } ]	701
2eb1f2826dba	0E5BCFB10650	As the end of a school year comes to a close, the summer is just beginning. Many during summer use it as a time to have fun and take a break from school. Some schools though require students to complete a summer project to ensure learning continues throughout the year. This can help to make sure that the student mind is awake and ready to learn when the start of the new school year begins.	Lead	Effective	[ "As", "end", "school", "year", "comes", "close", "summer", "beginning", "Many", "summer", "use", "time", "fun", "take", "break", "school", "Some", "schools", "though", "require", "students", "complete", "summer", "project", "ensure", "learning", "continues", "throughout", "year", "This", "help", "make", "sure", "student", "mind", "awake", "ready", "learn", "start", "new", "school", "year", "begins" ]	0	393	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9981123208999634 } ]	702
794f175c3677	0E5BCFB10650	The basis for summer projects to assure continuous learning should be student-designed	Position	Adequate	[ "The", "basis", "summer", "projects", "assure", "continuous", "learning" ]	0	87	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9977940320968628 } ]	703
804f6ad93bea	0E5BCFB10650	creative projects would be produced	Claim	Effective	[ "creative", "projects", "would", "produced" ]	0	36	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9992231130599976 } ]	704
7b41031e96e8	0E5BCFB10650	it would give students an opportunity to take control of their education.	Claim	Effective	[ "would", "give", "students", "opportunity", "take", "control", "education" ]	0	75	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.999510645866394 } ]	705
703751d0fe85	0E5BCFB10650	During the school year, students go from class to class completing the required work to excel. In most cases, this requires sitting through a lecture followed by an activity and homework. All of which are teacher-designed. For this reason, summer projects should be student-designed.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "During", "school", "year", "students", "go", "class", "class", "completing", "required", "work", "excel", "In", "cases", "requires", "sitting", "lecture", "followed", "activity", "homework", "All", "For", "reason", "summer", "projects" ]	0	284	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9641631245613098 } ]	706
a9b9ef30ef18	0E5BCFB10650	Student-designed projects would give students the opportunity to take control of their education	Claim	Effective	[ "projects", "would", "give", "students", "opportunity", "take", "control", "education" ]	0	97	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9987095594406128 } ]	707
6f003225b4d6	0E5BCFB10650	When a teacher assigns a project, there are strict guidelines on how the project should be completed. To combat the harsh guidelines, a student-designed project would create more creative projects.	Claim	Effective	[ "When", "teacher", "assigns", "project", "strict", "guidelines", "project", "completed", "To", "combat", "harsh", "guidelines", "project", "would", "create", "creative", "projects" ]	0	198	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9844518899917603 } ]	709
9d5d750663ce	0E5BCFB10650	Some may argue that if summer projects were teacher-designed, then the teachers could regulate and prepare the students better for the upcoming school year.	Counterclaim	Effective	[ "Some", "may", "argue", "summer", "projects", "teachers", "could", "regulate", "prepare", "students", "better", "upcoming", "school", "year" ]	0	157	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9988126754760742 } ]	711
093876054001	0E5BCFB10650	This may be true, but considering that throughout the normal school year teachers design and assign work to students, it would be more beneficial to give students the opportunity to learn how to take charge of their own work.	Rebuttal	Effective	[ "This", "may", "true", "considering", "throughout", "normal", "school", "year", "teachers", "design", "assign", "work", "students", "would", "beneficial", "give", "students", "opportunity", "learn", "take", "charge", "work" ]	0	226	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8334506154060364 } ]	712
6d4f2c45fbbb	0E5BCFB10650	Continuing to have teachers dictate the types of projects students complete year round will not prepare them for the world. A student-designed project would prepare students better for the world.	Claim	Effective	[ "Continuing", "teachers", "dictate", "types", "projects", "students", "complete", "year", "round", "prepare", "world", "A", "project", "would", "prepare", "students", "better", "world" ]	0	196	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9992170333862305 } ]	713
eebd97587f37	0E5BCFB10650	Once the students enter the world, there won't always be a teacher telling them how to complete the task assigned to them. Giving students the opportunity to experience independence over the summer is a perfect way to prepare them for the world. Preparing students for the world out of school is more important than preparing them for a few weeks in the future when school starts.	Evidence	Effective	[ "Once", "students", "enter", "world", "wo", "always", "teacher", "telling", "complete", "task", "assigned", "Giving", "students", "opportunity", "experience", "independence", "summer", "perfect", "way", "prepare", "world", "Preparing", "students", "world", "school", "important", "preparing", "weeks", "future", "school", "starts" ]	0	381	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9967837333679199 } ]	714
9821e52919d4	0E67436136BE	intro: Today ill be telling you the pros and cons about having this technology in our schools from counslers being able to tell whats with the student to invading the privacy of what we humans have to preventng suicide and to be able to maybe stop someone from commiting suicide or knowing someone is going through depression.	Lead	Ineffective	[ "intro", "Today", "ill", "telling", "pros", "cons", "technology", "schools", "counslers", "able", "tell", "whats", "student", "invading", "privacy", "humans", "preventng", "suicide", "able", "maybe", "stop", "someone", "commiting", "suicide", "knowing", "someone", "going", "depression" ]	2	327	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9932271838188171 } ]	716
925d6539bda7	0E67436136BE	body: so me personally think this would be some great technology to have in our schools	Position	Adequate	[ "body", "personally", "think", "would", "great", "technology", "schools" ]	0	88	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9968780279159546 } ]	717
cb3f67486973	0E67436136BE	espically for consoulers so say someone is really sad and depressed but they are to scared to open up about how they feel or whats going so you put the computer on there face and it shows they are depressed sad and scared well now you know how your student is feeling	Claim	Ineffective	[ "espically", "consoulers", "say", "someone", "really", "sad", "depressed", "scared", "open", "feel", "whats", "going", "put", "computer", "face", "shows", "depressed", "sad", "scared", "well", "know", "student", "feeling" ]	2	268	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9751313328742981 } ]	718
15eb2902e184	0E67436136BE	so then you cheer them up and work to make things better you dont know it but you just saved a life because who knows weather or not that student was about to comit suicide or say someone was threatned and they will not tell you that so they act like there fine but you put the computer on them and it shows that they are scared now you know they are scared and can try to work with them to open up	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "cheer", "work", "make", "things", "better", "dont", "know", "saved", "life", "knows", "weather", "student", "comit", "suicide", "say", "someone", "threatned", "tell", "act", "like", "fine", "put", "computer", "shows", "scared", "know", "scared", "try", "work", "open" ]	1	399	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9368847012519836 } ]	719
302b5d8ce097	0E67436136BE	but from other people perspectives i can totally see how this is a total invading of privacy because we all have secrects and we dont want people knowing if were depressed or sad and alot of people dont like to communicate or open with anyone and also what if things get passed around about you being depressed the generatin today are bullys so i can see someone making fun of someone for being depressed.	Counterclaim	Adequate	[ "people", "perspectives", "totally", "see", "total", "invading", "privacy", "secrects", "dont", "want", "people", "knowing", "depressed", "sad", "alot", "people", "dont", "like", "communicate", "open", "anyone", "also", "things", "get", "passed", "around", "depressed", "generatin", "today", "bullys", "see", "someone", "making", "fun", "someone", "depressed" ]	3	406	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9974536299705505 } ]	720
a7a3335f4ed2	0E6BB199BF93	it is good to say that they must sign up in a activity in sports or yearbooks.	Position	Adequate	[ "good", "say", "must", "sign", "activity", "sports", "yearbooks" ]	0	79	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9980850219726562 } ]	722
bc44b6350c89	0E6BB199BF93	So they can move around and exersice.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "So", "move", "around", "exersice" ]	1	38	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9524150490760803 } ]	723
7c85e9dd7df0	0E6BB199BF93	Sports is a good activity to sign up for because in sports you can sign up for football soccer,baseball,Track	Claim	Adequate	[ "Sports", "good", "activity", "sign", "sports", "sign", "football", "soccer", "baseball", "Track" ]	0	110	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.999799907207489 } ]	724
ade173bb00d1	0E6BB199BF93	All of these activities are great to sign up for even if. You dont have to sign up for these you can sign up for the yearbooks. The year books are great	Claim	Adequate	[ "All", "activities", "great", "sign", "even", "You", "dont", "sign", "sign", "yearbooks", "The", "year", "books", "great" ]	0	153	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9997946619987488 } ]	725
f01e2b114700	0E6BB199BF93	because if more people sign up for the yearbooks the pictures can be done faster.	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "people", "sign", "yearbooks", "pictures", "done", "faster" ]	0	82	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9987238049507141 } ]	726
2a3fc551a64f	0E6BB199BF93	during football games the players can be really loud and anoying and tease you wich can be bad and get people mad that has happened alot during football history.	Counterclaim	Adequate	[ "football", "games", "players", "really", "loud", "anoying", "tease", "wich", "bad", "get", "people", "mad", "happened", "alot", "football", "history" ]	0	162	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9068572521209717 } ]	728
a321bbc9f47c	0E6BB199BF93	during yearbooks if your teaacher tells you, you can get out for class and go to different classes and take pictures in there classroom and post them in the yearbook. Also you can take a camera with you and take some cool pictures there. The yearbooks can be awsome because you can take pictures of fun and funny stuff in a classroom.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "yearbooks", "teaacher", "tells", "get", "class", "go", "different", "classes", "take", "pictures", "classroom", "post", "yearbook", "Also", "take", "camera", "take", "cool", "pictures", "The", "yearbooks", "awsome", "take", "pictures", "fun", "funny", "stuff", "classroom" ]	1	336	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9899795055389404 } ]	729
294a00ec8ee9	0EC4EF416F2F	the advantages of limiting car usage are very rare	Position	Ineffective	[ "advantages", "limiting", "car", "usage", "rare" ]	0	51	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8476958274841309 } ]	730
09c6533bdd95	0EC4EF416F2F	some people own cars some dont some take bus but some work so they can own there own car. there has been a large drop in the percentage 16-to 39 year olds getting there license and other people who already have there license are renewing them, kids get jobs so that when there more older there able to get there own car without asking there parents to take them places .	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "people", "cars", "dont", "take", "bus", "work", "car", "large", "drop", "percentage", "39", "year", "olds", "getting", "license", "people", "already", "license", "renewing", "kids", "get", "jobs", "older", "able", "get", "car", "without", "asking", "parents", "take", "places" ]	0	371	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9865828156471252 } ]	731
67c59a28c743	0EC4EF416F2F	car ownership is allowed but there are only two places to park large garages at the edge of the development where a car owner buys a spance for the amount of 40,000 with the home	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "car", "ownership", "allowed", "two", "places", "park", "large", "garages", "edge", "development", "car", "owner", "buys", "spance", "amount", "home" ]	1	179	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.988198459148407 } ]	732
86072183ff66	0EC4EF416F2F	passenger cars are respinsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent in some car intensive ares in the united states in the new approach stores are placed a walk way on a main street rather than in malls along some distant high way. almost 4,000 drivers wee fined. 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "passenger", "cars", "respinsible", "12", "percent", "greenhouse", "gas", "emissions", "europe", "50", "percent", "car", "intensive", "ares", "united", "states", "new", "approach", "stores", "placed", "walk", "way", "main", "street", "rather", "malls", "along", "distant", "high", "way", "almost", "drivers", "wee", "fined", "percent", "average", "diesel", "engines", "rest", "western", "europe" ]	1	370	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9952204823493958 } ]	733
2d467a2ecc33	0ED28D8A5EC4	The author talks about the challenge of exploring venis, he talks about how astronomers are interested in venis because it may once have be the most earth like planet in our solar system.	Position	Adequate	[ "The", "author", "talks", "challenge", "exploring", "venis", "talks", "astronomers", "interested", "venis", "may", "earth", "like", "planet", "solar", "system" ]	1	188	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9988964796066284 } ]	734
d9490f47c903	0ED28D8A5EC4	The fact that there is a possiblity of there once being life on that planets surface, that is amazing.	Claim	Ineffective	[ "The", "fact", "possiblity", "life", "planets", "surface", "amazing" ]	0	103	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998534917831421 } ]	735
50e8224ef0da	0ED28D8A5EC4	The facts abouts about venis and how the author shows that it can be dangerous to be on venis.	Claim	Adequate	[ "The", "facts", "abouts", "venis", "author", "shows", "dangerous", "venis" ]	2	95	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9939815402030945 } ]	736
bdcca4bcc7e3	0ED28D8A5EC4	The first fact, the atmosphere of venis is 97 percent carbon dixide. If there was life on venis at once, then the life like creatures didn't last long. The planet venis could be the twin of earth. On the suface of venis it is about 800 degrees fahrenhiet.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "The", "first", "fact", "atmosphere", "venis", "97", "percent", "carbon", "dixide", "If", "life", "venis", "life", "like", "creatures", "last", "long", "The", "planet", "venis", "could", "twin", "earth", "On", "suface", "venis", "800", "degrees", "fahrenhiet" ]	4	256	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8922122120857239 } ]	737
f1943d4f55eb	0ED28D8A5EC4	The chance of there being life on venis, there is about 50/50 chance of there once was life.	Claim	Adequate	[ "The", "chance", "life", "venis", "chance", "life" ]	1	93	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9225777983665466 } ]	738
29a0d16b416a	0ED28D8A5EC4	the fact is that the pressure of the planet being 90. that could crush any lind of living thing. There can't be a creature that live on a surface that is hot. The pressure of the planets atmosphere is 90, humans can be crushed easily.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "fact", "pressure", "planet", "could", "crush", "lind", "living", "thing", "There", "ca", "creature", "live", "surface", "hot", "The", "pressure", "planets", "atmosphere", "90", "humans", "crushed", "easily" ]	0	235	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9954042434692383 } ]	739
30813910e7a9	0ED28D8A5EC4	The distantce from venis to our earth	Claim	Adequate	[ "The", "distantce", "venis", "earth" ]	2	38	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9775526523590088 } ]	740
02c606b83fe8	0ED28D8A5EC4	the planet venis is rearly near our earth. it is in the orbit in our solar system so yes it is close by to the earth. Just about anything in the salor system of our is close to us.	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "planet", "venis", "rearly", "near", "earth", "orbit", "solar", "system", "yes", "close", "earth", "Just", "anything", "salor", "system", "close", "us" ]	3	181	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9937028288841248 } ]	741
f5e853c0b8ff	0ED28D8A5EC4	The author is right, the dangers of life on venis is very risky. It can crush anything with the pressure. It could kill anything that goes past its atmosphere. the athor despites the risk and the way venis is.	Concluding Statement	Adequate	[ "The", "author", "right", "dangers", "life", "venis", "risky", "It", "crush", "anything", "pressure", "It", "could", "kill", "anything", "goes", "past", "atmosphere", "athor", "despites", "risk", "way", "venis" ]	3	210	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.976651132106781 } ]	742
438817e9a395	0ED86BD7C2F0	I think that Luke and Don had a good reason to join that program.	Position	Adequate	[ "I", "think", "Luke", "Don", "good", "reason", "join", "program" ]	0	66	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.6576271057128906 } ]	744
69716a55e169	0EEE131E57EC	I am Jacob Bomberger. I am a sea going cowboy and I have crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times, and the pacific 2 times. Being a sea cowboy is a great way to serve people in war. I have been to many places, I have been seeing sites and serveing countries for a long time.	Lead	Adequate	[ "I", "Jacob", "Bomberger", "I", "sea", "going", "cowboy", "I", "crossed", "Atlantic", "ocean", "16", "times", "pacific", "2", "times", "Being", "sea", "cowboy", "great", "way", "serve", "people", "war", "I", "many", "places", "I", "seeing", "sites", "serveing", "countries", "long", "time" ]	2	271	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9984745383262634 } ]	745
47091c9daa77	0EEE131E57EC	My friend Don Reist invited me on a trip to Europe on a cattle boat in 1945, and that is when it all began. You should participate in the sea cowboys program because it is a great way to see sites, go traveling and make new friends. I have been to many different countries like Europe, Greece, China, Italy, and Crete!	Evidence	Adequate	[ "My", "friend", "Don", "Reist", "invited", "trip", "Europe", "cattle", "boat", "1945", "began", "You", "participate", "sea", "cowboys", "program", "great", "way", "see", "sites", "go", "traveling", "make", "new", "friends", "I", "many", "different", "countries", "like", "Europe", "Greece", "China", "Italy", "Crete" ]	1	319	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9994837045669556 } ]	746
0a13f3afb8b9	0EEE131E57EC	You could see these sites too if you join the sea cowboys program too.	Claim	Adequate	[ "You", "could", "see", "sites", "join", "sea", "cowboys", "program" ]	0	72	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9883572459220886 } ]	747
9727a1f800ad	0EEE131E57EC	It is also a very good way to make friends to.	Claim	Adequate	[ "It", "also", "good", "way", "make", "friends" ]	0	47	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998791217803955 } ]	748
2262cff51f33	0EEE131E57EC	I have made friends with the people on the boats with me and the people i meet in different countries.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "I", "made", "friends", "people", "boats", "people", "meet", "different", "countries" ]	0	103	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998125433921814 } ]	749
f0a289259056	0EEE131E57EC	Taking care of the animals was a great way for me to pass the time and helping my aunt Katie's farm made it alot easier. We arrived in Europe right after the pacific war. After Europe we packed our animals and headed up to Greece. I turned 18 before reaching greece so i was old enough to get drafted into the millitary, But they told me that i should just keep doing what im doing. The sea cowboys program is a great way to do millitary service to. .	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "Taking", "care", "animals", "great", "way", "pass", "time", "helping", "aunt", "Katie", "farm", "made", "alot", "easier", "We", "arrived", "Europe", "right", "pacific", "war", "After", "Europe", "packed", "animals", "headed", "Greece", "I", "turned", "18", "reaching", "greece", "old", "enough", "get", "drafted", "millitary", "But", "told", "keep", "im", "The", "sea", "cowboys", "program", "great", "way", "millitary", "service" ]	0	452	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9854158759117126 } ]	750
0143dfa477b0	0EEE131E57EC	Being a sea cowboy is more than an adventure, It helped me see the world and know exactly what is going on in other contries	Concluding Statement	Adequate	[ "Being", "sea", "cowboy", "adventure", "It", "helped", "see", "world", "know", "exactly", "going", "contries" ]	1	125	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9993844032287598 } ]	751
9b6f909d1192	0EEE131E57EC	I think you should join the sea cowboy program because it would be a learning experience for all. The sea cowboy programis a life changing expirence that i think you would enjoy!	Position	Effective	[ "I", "think", "join", "sea", "cowboy", "program", "would", "learning", "experience", "The", "sea", "cowboy", "programis", "life", "changing", "expirence", "think", "would", "enjoy" ]	2	179	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9989303946495056 } ]	752
242111e89e22	0F0059FAAF36	Swish swash the boat tips back and forth as we head forward.	Lead	Adequate	[ "Swish", "swash", "boat", "tips", "back", "forth", "head", "forward" ]	0	61	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8968481421470642 } ]	753
3cc83c93439b	0F0059FAAF36	LOVE animals, water, or everything become a Seagoing Cowboy.	Position	Adequate	[ "LOVE", "animals", "water", "everything", "become", "Seagoing", "Cowboy" ]	0	61	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9993855953216553 } ]	754
10bb0639c247	0F0059FAAF36	This will help you freshen up. You will be able to see fish, seagles, whales, dolphins, and much more. You will see many other people and you can comepeat in baceball, volleyball, table- tennis, fencing, and evan boxing. Not realy the sportsey kind of person thats fine you can read, write, whisle, and play other games.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "This", "help", "freshen", "You", "able", "see", "fish", "seagles", "whales", "dolphins", "much", "You", "see", "many", "people", "comepeat", "baceball", "volleyball", "tennis", "fencing", "evan", "boxing", "Not", "realy", "sportsey", "kind", "person", "thats", "fine", "read", "write", "whisle", "play", "games" ]	5	321	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9906427264213562 } ]	755
f46af20a2160	0F0059FAAF36	Bang chrash heho the animals may make a lot of noise but ......... their sooooooooo cute.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "Bang", "chrash", "heho", "animals", "may", "make", "lot", "noise", "sooooooooo", "cute" ]	3	90	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9939261078834534 } ]	756
7369bd5e61b4	0F0059FAAF36	You feed the houres, the ponyes, and many more animals.	Claim	Adequate	[ "You", "feed", "houres", "ponyes", "many", "animals" ]	2	56	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9884182810783386 } ]	757
0c52a3ad95bf	0F0059FAAF36	''I always say life is not always about what you feel the world consist of others or dose Albert Eistine say that I can not reamember anymore'' ''I know life is not seved to you on a silver plater you have to work for it BUUUT for a hourse it is toutilyey not fair I mean why do they get it all and we have to give it to them. SOOOO sorry I got of tipice waaaaaayyyyyy off topic.''	Evidence	Ineffective	[ "always", "say", "life", "always", "feel", "world", "consist", "others", "dose", "Albert", "Eistine", "say", "I", "reamember", "anymore", "know", "life", "seved", "silver", "plater", "work", "BUUUT", "hourse", "toutilyey", "fair", "I", "mean", "get", "give", "SOOOO", "sorry", "I", "got", "tipice", "waaaaaayyyyyy", "topic" ]	8	382	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9986100196838379 } ]	758
90eac4871ddd	0F0059FAAF36	So as I was saying the needs of others come first not your own when your a Seagoing Cowboy.	Claim	Adequate	[ "So", "I", "saying", "needs", "others", "come", "first", "Seagoing", "Cowboy" ]	0	92	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9979700446128845 } ]	759
3a8b6267eb78	0F0059FAAF36	It is all around you it is blue it is wet what is it...? it is water.	Claim	Adequate	[ "It", "around", "blue", "wet", "water" ]	0	70	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.99445641040802 } ]	760
7c68c55c72ec	0F0059FAAF36	a The water dose not come from a skink it comes from omm Well i do not know where it comes from. You can feel that ocen brease going throurth your hair. That solty air filling your lunges it is exstrodinary.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "The", "water", "dose", "come", "skink", "comes", "omm", "Well", "know", "comes", "You", "feel", "ocen", "brease", "going", "throurth", "hair", "That", "solty", "air", "filling", "lunges", "exstrodinary" ]	6	209	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9767377972602844 } ]	761
8062c6b1f00f	0F0059FAAF36	Mony mony who dose not LOOOOVE mony.	Claim	Adequate	[ "Mony", "mony", "dose", "LOOOOVE", "mony" ]	0	37	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9645773768424988 } ]	762
c7b1d4ce6501	0F0059FAAF36	The joney back is allll free time you can do what evver you want. So you get paid for doing nothing cool right. will at least I do. become a Seagoing Cowboy.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "The", "joney", "back", "allll", "free", "time", "evver", "want", "So", "get", "paid", "nothing", "cool", "right", "least", "I", "become", "Seagoing", "Cowboy" ]	3	158	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.6787232160568237 } ]	763
8dcb164f4e76	0F0059FAAF36	You might say I have to clean up poop gross.	Counterclaim	Adequate	[ "You", "might", "say", "I", "clean", "poop", "gross" ]	0	45	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9997568726539612 } ]	764
67993539cfb3	0F0059FAAF36	Well you are right sorry but it is worth it. I get sea sick. Then sty in the bottom of the ship. Idon't like fish. aThen do not look at them ovily. I have probles or isuse. Then stop with alllll the complaining.	Rebuttal	Adequate	[ "Well", "right", "sorry", "worth", "I", "get", "sea", "sick", "Then", "sty", "bottom", "ship", "Ido", "like", "fish", "aThen", "look", "ovily", "I", "probles", "isuse", "Then", "stop", "alllll", "complaining" ]	4	212	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8959106802940369 } ]	765
094dad2b5afb	0F0059FAAF36	Become a SEAGOING COWBOY now; you will not ever for get it.	Concluding Statement	Adequate	[ "Become", "SEAGOING", "COWBOY", "ever", "get" ]	0	60	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8497751355171204 } ]	766
de5ee9634031	0F10DC1AE015	Across the nation, nearly 98% of schools have offered extracurricular activities for their students, but less than half of that 98% have mandated participating in one. In many schools worldwide, extracurriculars have been known to both help and hurt students - they can lead to staying up late making up for lost time, or they can lead to winning awards and even scholarships.	Lead	Adequate	[ "Across", "nation", "nearly", "98", "schools", "offered", "extracurricular", "activities", "students", "less", "half", "98", "mandated", "participating", "one", "In", "many", "schools", "worldwide", "extracurriculars", "known", "help", "hurt", "students", "lead", "staying", "late", "making", "lost", "time", "lead", "winning", "awards", "even", "scholarships" ]	0	377	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9445308446884155 } ]	767
39aee3524bc4	0F10DC1AE015	I believe that all students should be required to participate in extracurricular activities.	Position	Adequate	[ "I", "believe", "students", "required", "participate", "extracurricular", "activities" ]	0	93	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9423973560333252 } ]	768
ec3cb26ba093	0F10DC1AE015	mandating that students participate in after school activities could improve kids' work ethic.	Claim	Effective	[ "mandating", "students", "participate", "school", "activities", "could", "improve", "kids", "work", "ethic" ]	0	95	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9563524127006531 } ]	769
0acaccee9bc3	0F10DC1AE015	requiring students to join extracurricular activities could help students get into better colleges.	Claim	Effective	[ "requiring", "students", "join", "extracurricular", "activities", "could", "help", "students", "get", "better", "colleges" ]	0	100	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9912926554679871 } ]	771
22be38aa2b5d	0F10DC1AE015	It's actually been shown that clubs and teams could improve a students' health.	Claim	Effective	[ "It", "actually", "shown", "clubs", "teams", "could", "improve", "students", "health" ]	0	80	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8943650126457214 } ]	773
78f30ab7c08c	0F10DC1AE015	some might argue that students should not be mandated to take part in extracurricular activities, and say that teens may already have a "full plate" and thus become stressed	Counterclaim	Effective	[ "might", "argue", "students", "mandated", "take", "part", "extracurricular", "activities", "say", "teens", "may", "already", "full", "plate", "thus", "become", "stressed" ]	0	174	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9929739236831665 } ]	775
b13b8d1c4c1f	0F10DC1AE015	A statistic from the Teens and Mental Health Welfare Society revealed that 48% of students who participated in after school activities reported an increase in stress levels. To put it differently, close to half of the kids they talked to felt stressed due to their extracurriculars. This also demonstrates how a few students are actually pressured by their after school activities. Ultimately, extracurricular activities may stress students.	Evidence	Effective	[ "A", "statistic", "Teens", "Mental", "Health", "Welfare", "Society", "revealed", "48", "students", "participated", "school", "activities", "reported", "increase", "stress", "levels", "To", "put", "differently", "close", "half", "kids", "talked", "felt", "stressed", "due", "extracurriculars", "This", "also", "demonstrates", "students", "actually", "pressured", "school", "activities", "Ultimately", "extracurricular", "activities", "may", "stress", "students" ]	0	442	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9827841520309448 } ]	776
9f1b23528219	0F10DC1AE015	While that might be true, there's no denying that after school activities can also teach kids to lessen their stress by learning to budget their time	Rebuttal	Adequate	[ "While", "might", "true", "denying", "school", "activities", "also", "teach", "kids", "lessen", "stress", "learning", "budget", "time" ]	0	150	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8302025198936462 } ]	777
23bae6306ab5	0F10DC1AE015	In the end, I think that we should mandate participating in extracurriculars, as it could improve kids' work ethic, assist students in getting into good colleges, and even keep them healthy. Imagine a school with no after school clubs or teams offered to students; kids would be bored, unhappy to go to school with no chance to socialize or get active, and, most importantly, no chance to broaden their horizon and truly reach their full potential.	Concluding Statement	Effective	[ "In", "end", "I", "think", "mandate", "participating", "extracurriculars", "could", "improve", "kids", "work", "ethic", "assist", "students", "getting", "good", "colleges", "even", "keep", "healthy", "Imagine", "school", "school", "clubs", "teams", "offered", "students", "kids", "would", "bored", "unhappy", "go", "school", "chance", "socialize", "get", "active", "importantly", "chance", "broaden", "horizon", "truly", "reach", "full", "potential" ]	0	449	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9993067979812622 } ]	779
89554ddc22e1	0F2199921C33	Do you remember the summer projects that you had to do during summer break? Even now as fewer places require summer projects for all class,they are still an important thing for both students and teachers. They allow both so see how the other is either by teaching style or how they did on the content.	Lead	Adequate	[ "Do", "remember", "summer", "projects", "summer", "break", "Even", "fewer", "places", "require", "summer", "projects", "class", "still", "important", "thing", "students", "teachers", "They", "allow", "see", "either", "teaching", "style", "content" ]	0	302	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9992363452911377 } ]	780
cec88a31dcf3	0F2199921C33	The summer projects should be teacher designed	Position	Adequate	[ "The", "summer", "projects", "teacher", "designed" ]	0	47	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9851614236831665 } ]	781
c81b32b22872	0F2199921C33	it gives the teacher a chance to gauge the students academic level	Claim	Effective	[ "gives", "teacher", "chance", "gauge", "students", "academic", "level" ]	0	67	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9995299577713013 } ]	782
27ca36a0bda2	0F2199921C33	base it on what they will be learning that year	Claim	Effective	[ "base", "learning", "year" ]	0	48	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.996516227722168 } ]	783
9a6b9a33d90a	0F2199921C33	and learn the learning style of students.	Claim	Effective	[ "learn", "learning", "style", "students" ]	0	43	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9991438388824463 } ]	784
614cd99fec55	0F2199921C33	Some say that student designed summer projects are better because they allow the student to pick something that they find interesting and that they understand.	Counterclaim	Effective	[ "Some", "say", "student", "designed", "summer", "projects", "better", "allow", "student", "pick", "something", "find", "interesting", "understand" ]	0	160	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.938744306564331 } ]	785
a2c4308dd1bf	0F2199921C33	And while it may be good that the student is interested in the topic they are working on it sort off defeats the purpose of the project. Because the projects are suppose to be a introduction into the next year and a way for the teacher to learn about the students	Rebuttal	Effective	[ "And", "may", "good", "student", "interested", "topic", "working", "sort", "defeats", "purpose", "project", "Because", "projects", "suppose", "introduction", "next", "year", "way", "teacher", "learn", "students" ]	0	264	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9997305274009705 } ]	786
6c1d9b65465f	0F2199921C33	Teacher-designed summer projects allow teachers to gauge students academic level on various topics.	Claim	Effective	[ "summer", "projects", "allow", "teachers", "gauge", "students", "academic", "level", "various", "topics" ]	0	100	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.990990161895752 } ]	788
980414e30e59	0F2199921C33	eacher designed summer projects also allow teachers to give a glimpse into the years curriculum.	Claim	Effective	[ "eacher", "designed", "summer", "projects", "also", "allow", "teachers", "give", "glimpse", "years", "curriculum" ]	1	98	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9991714954376221 } ]	790
76957413823c	0F2199921C33	Teacher designed summer projects in addition allow teachers the ability to see the students learning style and learn them.	Claim	Effective	[ "Teacher", "designed", "summer", "projects", "addition", "allow", "teachers", "ability", "see", "students", "learning", "style", "learn" ]	0	123	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9996849298477173 } ]	792
0e71caa5c79e	0F2199921C33	Those are some of the reasons schools should have Teacher designed summer projects. Schools should have their summer projects be designed by teachers because it allows the teacher to gauge students understanding of principles and topics,allows introduction of new material,and learn learning styles. All schools that do summer projects should allow Teachers to designed them because that will help the year go better for both the teacher and student.	Concluding Statement	Adequate	[ "Those", "reasons", "schools", "Teacher", "designed", "summer", "projects", "Schools", "summer", "projects", "designed", "teachers", "allows", "teacher", "gauge", "students", "understanding", "principles", "topics", "allows", "introduction", "new", "material", "learn", "learning", "styles", "All", "schools", "summer", "projects", "allow", "Teachers", "designed", "help", "year", "go", "better", "teacher", "student" ]	0	460	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.5635280013084412 } ]	794
a60f8be7b0a6	0F23D0A1E0F0	What the author was suggesting when he was saying venus is dangerous but a worthy pursuit.	Lead	Ineffective	[ "What", "author", "suggesting", "saying", "venus", "dangerous", "worthy", "pursuit" ]	0	91	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9782022833824158 } ]	795
5e81eae53b78	0F23D0A1E0F0	Was that no spacecraft survived more that a couple of hours on venus.	Claim	Ineffective	[ "Was", "spacecraft", "survived", "couple", "hours", "venus" ]	0	70	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9986962676048279 } ]	796
f36f06125781	0F23D0A1E0F0	The atmosphere was dangerous to people.	Claim	Ineffective	[ "The", "atmosphere", "dangerous", "people" ]	0	40	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9983547329902649 } ]	797
1b0b4c81942c	0F23D0A1E0F0	It has the hottest surface temperature.	Claim	Ineffective	[ "It", "hottest", "surface", "temperature" ]	0	40	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9971711039543152 } ]	798
1e05a80c7883	0F23D0A1E0F0	you cant go onto Venus	Position	Ineffective	[ "cant", "go", "onto", "Venus" ]	0	23	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9624752402305603 } ]	799
2a9c2c3b8861	0F23D0A1E0F0	no spacecraft lasted more than a couple of hours on Venus.	Claim	Adequate	[ "spacecraft", "lasted", "couple", "hours", "Venus" ]	0	59	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9864522218704224 } ]	800
96ae918d179f	0F23D0A1E0F0	If a spacecraft couldn't survive on Venus there is no way that a human can survive.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "If", "spacecraft", "could", "survive", "Venus", "way", "human", "survive" ]	0	84	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9987139701843262 } ]	801
c9703d74c226	0F23D0A1E0F0	The second reason that man cannot be on Venus is because the atmosphere is dangerous to humans.	Claim	Adequate	[ "The", "second", "reason", "man", "Venus", "atmosphere", "dangerous", "humans" ]	0	96	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9945046305656433 } ]	802
c28db01abb67	0F23D0A1E0F0	The atmosphere is almost 97 percent cardon dioxide. Which is deadly to humans. Its like being trapped in an small airtight box with no holes.	Evidence	Adequate	[ "The", "atmosphere", "almost", "97", "percent", "cardon", "dioxide", "Which", "deadly", "humans", "Its", "like", "trapped", "small", "airtight", "box", "holes" ]	1	142	[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9888544082641602 } ]	803
6dfb2b5d373b	0F23D0A1E0F0	The last reason that humans can't be on Venus is because it also has the hottest surface temperature of all the planets.	Claim	Adequate	[ "The", "last", "reason", "humans", "ca", "Venus", "also", "hottest", "surface", "temperature", "planets" ]	0	121	[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8454031944274902 } ]	804

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It can indicate the difference between a genuinie smile and a forced one. To finish with some cientifics conclusions and understand better your boddy. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not ont only express emotions, but also may help produce them. A example is when a drama coach tells to his actor carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage because empath might happen when you see someone else expressions.

Evidence

Ineffective

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In conclusion a think this is a good idea, because you can problably know when a friend is feeling just looking on his face, so imagic that a software in your computer can know that

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents

Position

Adequate

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because In the text it states that venus is actually a planet and venus is the second planet from the sun. The text also states that venus is simple to see from a far distant. Finally, it says that numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study in etc. If you look back in paragraph 1& 2 that's where I got all the information from to support my answer.

Evidence

Ineffective

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There are many dangers that come along with studying planets. Along with the dangers, there are also countless benefits to learning more about different planets. In the passage, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author addresses the point that Venus is worth taking a closer look at and focusing on, no matter the dangers it could put one in.

Lead

Effective

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Although many people believe that the author doesn't support this idea well, the author provides researched evidence and past experiences all throughout the passage to support this idea.

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In, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author includes well researched evidence to support the idea that Venus is worthy of studying further.

Claim

Adequate

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The also supports his idea of studying Venus depsite the dangers because he includes past experiences that make this idea stronger.

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Effective

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When explaining past explorations to Venus, the author states, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." Facts that have been presented that occured in the past help the author support his idea that there is reasons why people should look into further studying Venus. These past facts present the idea that Venus once looked like Earth did, and if that is true, there are reasons why it should be looked into further.

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Effective

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Ultimatley, it is understandable why one would believe that it isn't smart to look into studying and experimenting with Venus; however, the examples of the researched facts and past experiences help to support the authors idea that despite the dangers, Venus is worthy of studying. There may be many dangers that come along with studying different planets, but based off the evidence the author provided, Venus has avoidable ways to make it safe to study.

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Effective

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As the end of a school year comes to a close, the summer is just beginning. Many during summer use it as a time to have fun and take a break from school. Some schools though require students to complete a summer project to ensure learning continues throughout the year. This can help to make sure that the student mind is awake and ready to learn when the start of the new school year begins.

Lead

Effective

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The basis for summer projects to assure continuous learning should be student-designed

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creative projects would be produced

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Effective

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it would give students an opportunity to take control of their education.

Claim

Effective

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During the school year, students go from class to class completing the required work to excel. In most cases, this requires sitting through a lecture followed by an activity and homework. All of which are teacher-designed. For this reason, summer projects should be student-designed.

Evidence

Adequate

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Student-designed projects would give students the opportunity to take control of their education

Claim

Effective

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When a teacher assigns a project, there are strict guidelines on how the project should be completed. To combat the harsh guidelines, a student-designed project would create more creative projects.

Claim

Effective

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Some may argue that if summer projects were teacher-designed, then the teachers could regulate and prepare the students better for the upcoming school year.

Counterclaim

Effective

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This may be true, but considering that throughout the normal school year teachers design and assign work to students, it would be more beneficial to give students the opportunity to learn how to take charge of their own work.

Rebuttal

Effective

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Continuing to have teachers dictate the types of projects students complete year round will not prepare them for the world. A student-designed project would prepare students better for the world.

Claim

Effective

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Once the students enter the world, there won't always be a teacher telling them how to complete the task assigned to them. Giving students the opportunity to experience independence over the summer is a perfect way to prepare them for the world. Preparing students for the world out of school is more important than preparing them for a few weeks in the future when school starts.

Evidence

Effective

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intro: Today ill be telling you the pros and cons about having this technology in our schools from counslers being able to tell whats with the student to invading the privacy of what we humans have to preventng suicide and to be able to maybe stop someone from commiting suicide or knowing someone is going through depression.

Lead

Ineffective

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body: so me personally think this would be some great technology to have in our schools

Position

Adequate

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espically for consoulers so say someone is really sad and depressed but they are to scared to open up about how they feel or whats going so you put the computer on there face and it shows they are depressed sad and scared well now you know how your student is feeling

Claim

Ineffective

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so then you cheer them up and work to make things better you dont know it but you just saved a life because who knows weather or not that student was about to comit suicide or say someone was threatned and they will not tell you that so they act like there fine but you put the computer on them and it shows that they are scared now you know they are scared and can try to work with them to open up

Evidence

Ineffective

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but from other people perspectives i can totally see how this is a total invading of privacy because we all have secrects and we dont want people knowing if were depressed or sad and alot of people dont like to communicate or open with anyone and also what if things get passed around about you being depressed the generatin today are bullys so i can see someone making fun of someone for being depressed.

Counterclaim

Adequate

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it is good to say that they must sign up in a activity in sports or yearbooks.

Position

Adequate

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So they can move around and exersice.

Evidence

Adequate

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Sports is a good activity to sign up for because in sports you can sign up for football soccer,baseball,Track

Claim

Adequate

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All of these activities are great to sign up for even if. You dont have to sign up for these you can sign up for the yearbooks. The year books are great

Claim

Adequate

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because if more people sign up for the yearbooks the pictures can be done faster.

Evidence

Ineffective

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during football games the players can be really loud and anoying and tease you wich can be bad and get people mad that has happened alot during football history.

Counterclaim

Adequate

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during yearbooks if your teaacher tells you, you can get out for class and go to different classes and take pictures in there classroom and post them in the yearbook. Also you can take a camera with you and take some cool pictures there. The yearbooks can be awsome because you can take pictures of fun and funny stuff in a classroom.

Evidence

Adequate

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the advantages of limiting car usage are very rare

Position

Ineffective

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some people own cars some dont some take bus but some work so they can own there own car. there has been a large drop in the percentage 16-to 39 year olds getting there license and other people who already have there license are renewing them, kids get jobs so that when there more older there able to get there own car without asking there parents to take them places .

Evidence

Ineffective

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car ownership is allowed but there are only two places to park large garages at the edge of the development where a car owner buys a spance for the amount of 40,000 with the home

Evidence

Ineffective

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passenger cars are respinsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent in some car intensive ares in the united states in the new approach stores are placed a walk way on a main street rather than in malls along some distant high way. almost 4,000 drivers wee fined. 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe

Evidence

Ineffective

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The author talks about the challenge of exploring venis, he talks about how astronomers are interested in venis because it may once have be the most earth like planet in our solar system.

Position

Adequate

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The fact that there is a possiblity of there once being life on that planets surface, that is amazing.

Claim

Ineffective

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The facts abouts about venis and how the author shows that it can be dangerous to be on venis.

Claim

Adequate

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The first fact, the atmosphere of venis is 97 percent carbon dixide. If there was life on venis at once, then the life like creatures didn't last long. The planet venis could be the twin of earth. On the suface of venis it is about 800 degrees fahrenhiet.

Evidence

Adequate

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The chance of there being life on venis, there is about 50/50 chance of there once was life.

Claim

Adequate

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the fact is that the pressure of the planet being 90. that could crush any lind of living thing. There can't be a creature that live on a surface that is hot. The pressure of the planets atmosphere is 90, humans can be crushed easily.

Evidence

Adequate

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The distantce from venis to our earth

Claim

Adequate

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38

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the planet venis is rearly near our earth. it is in the orbit in our solar system so yes it is close by to the earth. Just about anything in the salor system of our is close to us.

Evidence

Ineffective

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The author is right, the dangers of life on venis is very risky. It can crush anything with the pressure. It could kill anything that goes past its atmosphere. the athor despites the risk and the way venis is.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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3

210

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742

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I think that Luke and Don had a good reason to join that program.

Position

Adequate

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0

66

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744

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I am Jacob Bomberger. I am a sea going cowboy and I have crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times, and the pacific 2 times. Being a sea cowboy is a great way to serve people in war. I have been to many places, I have been seeing sites and serveing countries for a long time.

Lead

Adequate

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2

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[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9984745383262634 } ]

745

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My friend Don Reist invited me on a trip to Europe on a cattle boat in 1945, and that is when it all began. You should participate in the sea cowboys program because it is a great way to see sites, go traveling and make new friends. I have been to many different countries like Europe, Greece, China, Italy, and Crete!

Evidence

Adequate

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1

319

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9994837045669556 } ]

746

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You could see these sites too if you join the sea cowboys program too.

Claim

Adequate

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0

72

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9883572459220886 } ]

747

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It is also a very good way to make friends to.

Claim

Adequate

[ "It", "also", "good", "way", "make", "friends" ]

0

47

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998791217803955 } ]

748

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I have made friends with the people on the boats with me and the people i meet in different countries.

Evidence

Adequate

[ "I", "made", "friends", "people", "boats", "people", "meet", "different", "countries" ]

0

103

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998125433921814 } ]

749

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Taking care of the animals was a great way for me to pass the time and helping my aunt Katie's farm made it alot easier. We arrived in Europe right after the pacific war. After Europe we packed our animals and headed up to Greece. I turned 18 before reaching greece so i was old enough to get drafted into the millitary, But they told me that i should just keep doing what im doing. The sea cowboys program is a great way to do millitary service to. .

Evidence

Ineffective

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0

452

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750

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Being a sea cowboy is more than an adventure, It helped me see the world and know exactly what is going on in other contries

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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1

125

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751

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I think you should join the sea cowboy program because it would be a learning experience for all. The sea cowboy programis a life changing expirence that i think you would enjoy!

Position

Effective

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2

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752

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Swish swash the boat tips back and forth as we head forward.

Lead

Adequate

[ "Swish", "swash", "boat", "tips", "back", "forth", "head", "forward" ]

0

61

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8968481421470642 } ]

753

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LOVE animals, water, or everything become a Seagoing Cowboy.

Position

Adequate

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0

61

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754

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This will help you freshen up. You will be able to see fish, seagles, whales, dolphins, and much more. You will see many other people and you can comepeat in baceball, volleyball, table- tennis, fencing, and evan boxing. Not realy the sportsey kind of person thats fine you can read, write, whisle, and play other games.

Evidence

Adequate

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5

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755

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Bang chrash heho the animals may make a lot of noise but ......... their sooooooooo cute.

Evidence

Adequate

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3

90

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9939261078834534 } ]

756

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You feed the houres, the ponyes, and many more animals.

Claim

Adequate

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2

56

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9884182810783386 } ]

757

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''I always say life is not always about what you feel the world consist of others or dose Albert Eistine say that I can not reamember anymore'' ''I know life is not seved to you on a silver plater you have to work for it BUUUT for a hourse it is toutilyey not fair I mean why do they get it all and we have to give it to them. SOOOO sorry I got of tipice waaaaaayyyyyy off topic.''

Evidence

Ineffective

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8

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758

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So as I was saying the needs of others come first not your own when your a Seagoing Cowboy.

Claim

Adequate

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0

92

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9979700446128845 } ]

759

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It is all around you it is blue it is wet what is it...? it is water.

Claim

Adequate

[ "It", "around", "blue", "wet", "water" ]

0

70

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760

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a The water dose not come from a skink it comes from omm Well i do not know where it comes from. You can feel that ocen brease going throurth your hair. That solty air filling your lunges it is exstrodinary.

Evidence

Adequate

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6

209

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761

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Mony mony who dose not LOOOOVE mony.

Claim

Adequate

[ "Mony", "mony", "dose", "LOOOOVE", "mony" ]

0

37

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9645773768424988 } ]

762

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The joney back is allll free time you can do what evver you want. So you get paid for doing nothing cool right. will at least I do. become a Seagoing Cowboy.

Evidence

Adequate

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3

158

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763

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You might say I have to clean up poop gross.

Counterclaim

Adequate

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0

45

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9997568726539612 } ]

764

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Well you are right sorry but it is worth it. I get sea sick. Then sty in the bottom of the ship. Idon't like fish. aThen do not look at them ovily. I have probles or isuse. Then stop with alllll the complaining.

Rebuttal

Adequate

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4

212

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765

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Become a SEAGOING COWBOY now; you will not ever for get it.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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0

60

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766

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Across the nation, nearly 98% of schools have offered extracurricular activities for their students, but less than half of that 98% have mandated participating in one. In many schools worldwide, extracurriculars have been known to both help and hurt students - they can lead to staying up late making up for lost time, or they can lead to winning awards and even scholarships.

Lead

Adequate

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0

377

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9445308446884155 } ]

767

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I believe that all students should be required to participate in extracurricular activities.

Position

Adequate

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0

93

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9423973560333252 } ]

768

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mandating that students participate in after school activities could improve kids' work ethic.

Claim

Effective

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0

95

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769

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requiring students to join extracurricular activities could help students get into better colleges.

Claim

Effective

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0

100

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9912926554679871 } ]

771

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It's actually been shown that clubs and teams could improve a students' health.

Claim

Effective

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0

80

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8943650126457214 } ]

773

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some might argue that students should not be mandated to take part in extracurricular activities, and say that teens may already have a "full plate" and thus become stressed

Counterclaim

Effective

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0

174

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9929739236831665 } ]

775

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A statistic from the Teens and Mental Health Welfare Society revealed that 48% of students who participated in after school activities reported an increase in stress levels. To put it differently, close to half of the kids they talked to felt stressed due to their extracurriculars. This also demonstrates how a few students are actually pressured by their after school activities. Ultimately, extracurricular activities may stress students.

Evidence

Effective

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0

442

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776

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While that might be true, there's no denying that after school activities can also teach kids to lessen their stress by learning to budget their time

Rebuttal

Adequate

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0

150

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8302025198936462 } ]

777

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In the end, I think that we should mandate participating in extracurriculars, as it could improve kids' work ethic, assist students in getting into good colleges, and even keep them healthy. Imagine a school with no after school clubs or teams offered to students; kids would be bored, unhappy to go to school with no chance to socialize or get active, and, most importantly, no chance to broaden their horizon and truly reach their full potential.

Concluding Statement

Effective

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0

449

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9993067979812622 } ]

779

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Do you remember the summer projects that you had to do during summer break? Even now as fewer places require summer projects for all class,they are still an important thing for both students and teachers. They allow both so see how the other is either by teaching style or how they did on the content.

Lead

Adequate

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0

302

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9992363452911377 } ]

780

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The summer projects should be teacher designed

Position

Adequate

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0

47

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9851614236831665 } ]

781

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it gives the teacher a chance to gauge the students academic level

Claim

Effective

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0

67

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782

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base it on what they will be learning that year

Claim

Effective

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0

48

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.996516227722168 } ]

783

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and learn the learning style of students.

Claim

Effective

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0

43

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9991438388824463 } ]

784

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Some say that student designed summer projects are better because they allow the student to pick something that they find interesting and that they understand.

Counterclaim

Effective

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0

160

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785

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And while it may be good that the student is interested in the topic they are working on it sort off defeats the purpose of the project. Because the projects are suppose to be a introduction into the next year and a way for the teacher to learn about the students

Rebuttal

Effective

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0

264

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786

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Teacher-designed summer projects allow teachers to gauge students academic level on various topics.

Claim

Effective

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0

100

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.990990161895752 } ]

788

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eacher designed summer projects also allow teachers to give a glimpse into the years curriculum.

Claim

Effective

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1

98

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Teacher designed summer projects in addition allow teachers the ability to see the students learning style and learn them.

Claim

Effective

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0

123

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792

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Those are some of the reasons schools should have Teacher designed summer projects. Schools should have their summer projects be designed by teachers because it allows the teacher to gauge students understanding of principles and topics,allows introduction of new material,and learn learning styles. All schools that do summer projects should allow Teachers to designed them because that will help the year go better for both the teacher and student.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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0

460

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.5635280013084412 } ]

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What the author was suggesting when he was saying venus is dangerous but a worthy pursuit.

Lead

Ineffective

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0

91

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9782022833824158 } ]

795

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Was that no spacecraft survived more that a couple of hours on venus.

Claim

Ineffective

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0

70

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9986962676048279 } ]

796

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The atmosphere was dangerous to people.

Claim

Ineffective

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0

40

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9983547329902649 } ]

797

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It has the hottest surface temperature.

Claim

Ineffective

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0

40

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9971711039543152 } ]

798

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you cant go onto Venus

Position

Ineffective

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0

23

[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9624752402305603 } ]

799

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no spacecraft lasted more than a couple of hours on Venus.

Claim

Adequate

[ "spacecraft", "lasted", "couple", "hours", "Venus" ]

0

59

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9864522218704224 } ]

800

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If a spacecraft couldn't survive on Venus there is no way that a human can survive.

Evidence

Adequate

[ "If", "spacecraft", "could", "survive", "Venus", "way", "human", "survive" ]

0

84

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9987139701843262 } ]

801

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The second reason that man cannot be on Venus is because the atmosphere is dangerous to humans.

Claim

Adequate

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0

96

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9945046305656433 } ]

802

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The atmosphere is almost 97 percent cardon dioxide. Which is deadly to humans. Its like being trapped in an small airtight box with no holes.

Evidence

Adequate

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1

142

[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9888544082641602 } ]

803

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The last reason that humans can't be on Venus is because it also has the hottest surface temperature of all the planets.

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