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It good to play do activiy but it a lot thing to do outside have fun or some we young sports is fun to but no one want to be and a hot gym half of the day out of energy when you get home you get home you going want to go to bed going to want to eat and sleep that it now activty a lot eat and sleep that it now activty a lot of work some don't like now who want sit after scool to do some work 
Evidence
Ineffective
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I would join this program because I can help people in needs and I could travel and see things that I wanted to see a long time ago I could travel all around the world all day every day of the week.
Position
Adequate
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I like to support Luke for being brave to go out in the bigh world
Claim
Adequate
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he just got out of high school and he only lives in a small town were very few pepole live. That is the reason i would like to do that program see u next
Evidence
Adequate
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I support Lukes claims because they are very useful for the activty that he is duing
Claim
Ineffective
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i personnaly support Luke for caring because he didn't have to help people survive.
Claim
Adequate
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Luke is a very brave person and i support him for that
Claim
Adequate
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0
55
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i like Luke if he was ral or if he is i would like to meet him in person to say how much he helped those people he is a very good person to others.
Evidence
Adequate
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I would join this program to help Luke and save lifes
Claim
Adequate
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0
54
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I really like Luke he seems like a very helpful person and very succesful in life he didn't give up on school or those animals or the people who needed him to help and they probaly thank him for what he has done.
Evidence
Adequate
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I like the fact that the program teachs you resopnsabilty in life
Claim
Adequate
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how you can't just think about your self and think about others to and be helpful to others and that is just what Luke did he cared for the other people and not just himself and he cared for animals cause if Luke and Don wouldn't have saved them animals they would be dead or extinct.
Evidence
Adequate
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0
285
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There is a saying that goes as this; "You can't make everyone happy." One would typically use this saying if an action they make improves the situation for one person, but creates a worse situation for another. However, if Professor Thomas Huang's new 'Facial Action Coding System' proves to be what he says it can be, then Huang believes that there actually is a way to make everyone happy, even in the school setting.
Lead
Effective
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The implementation of technology able to read the emotional expressions of children in the classroom is valuable for both the teachers and the students.
Position
Effective
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Inside a school classroom, there is no doubt that it is hard to please everyone. Therefor, when a student becomes disengaged from the lesson, they often become bored and fall behind in the class. After-all, all students learn differently, so it is inevitable that some of the students will become disengaged. However, with his new technology, Professor Huang predicts that the "classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson"
Evidence
Adequate
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With this technology implemented, anytime a student starts to fall behind during the lesson, the computer could make slight adjustments to the teacher's plans to help redirect the student back on track.
Claim
Effective
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203
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It is common knowledge that the more a student falls behind in a class, the harder it becomes to catch up, which in turn makes the student fall behind even more. It is a viscious cycle that all stems from a day of not paying attention that could be averted by this technology
Evidence
Effective
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Once it sensed the troubling expressions on the child's face, it could flag down the teacher and alert him or her to the students problem, resulting in the child getting the counceling he or she needs.
Claim
Effective
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The amount of improvement a classroom could see if this technology was implemented correctly would be immeasurable. The system could prevent students from falling behind in class because they cannot relate to how the teacher is teaching, and the technology could see through fake expressions hiding more troubled thoughts. With this sort of system, it may actually be possible to "make everyone happy."
Concluding Statement
Effective
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The "Facial Action Coding System" is technology that can be used in the class room because some people can't figure out how good or bad someone is feeling.
Position
Adequate
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Teachers will be able to know if the student is learning or eithor not paying attention or sleeping in class.
Claim
Adequate
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It'll be easier for them to know what's false and what's true expression in their situation they could be in.
Claim
Adequate
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110
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In difference in the situation students can't understand someone's expression.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Thanks to the technolgy now it'll be easier to figure out students emotion or anyone.
Claim
Adequate
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The article states, " Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.""The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do."
Evidence
Adequate
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427
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Finally, yes the technology is worth a big margin but its worth to have the help we can all get to help us know many.
Claim
Ineffective
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118
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The national safety council estimates that 1.4million accidents occur every year due to people using their cell phones. 200,000 of those accidents alone are from texting and driving. How some people believe that texting and driving needs to be closely monitored because of the risk it involves. While other people think that it's alright to use your phone while driving as long as you keep glancing at the road as you are replying to your text
Lead
Effective
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444
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This negatively affects teens and their society, and should be strictly avoided.
Position
Adequate
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0
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Using your cell phone causes many distractions for your eyes, your mind, and your actions.
Claim
Effective
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0
91
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487
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Texting while driving not only endangers yourself but other people on the road as well
Claim
Effective
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0
87
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There are many simple solutions to stop texting while driving.
Claim
Adequate
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0
63
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491
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The numbers speak for themselves, too many accidents have occurred as a result of people using cell phones while driving. Lives continue to be endangered when people think they need to get in touch with friends or family. If we can just wait until we get to our destination before having to contact or respond to our message's danger can be avoided and lives will be saved. Always remember think before you pull out your cellphone before you commit a crime think of other people lives
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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0
490
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Here in the United States, we have a problem of obesity
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
56
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494
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more walking would be involved,
Claim
Adequate
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32
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495
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make the streets safer
Claim
Adequate
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23
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stop the polution of the air?
Claim
Adequate
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1
30
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497
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Car-free cities seem to be more safe.
Position
Adequate
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0
39
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498
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Obesity is a big problem in the United States. So instead of us just getting excerise of maybe 20 feet to walking to the car, and then the 45 feet to walk to where we need to go.
Claim
Adequate
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1
179
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it would be a lot safer for kids and teenagers to go out and have a good time and not worry about a lot going around them.
Claim
Adequate
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0
124
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We already have more pollution problems then we need.
Claim
Adequate
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0
54
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People just dont care anymore about how or where they live and they will just throw any kind of trash they want on the ground. So driving cars just helps the people already littering, the cars are just polluting the air we breathe. So instead of us Americans not giving a crap about what were doing to the wonderful beautiful planet we live on, we should start, and help, but not driving the things that pollute are air.
Evidence
Adequate
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0
421
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In a result of limiting car usage, Mr. Goldberg says " Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role." So this means that by approving it this year, there will be more public transportation then people driving there personal cars. Getting rid of cars would decrease a lot of the problems we have now.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Some of you might think, "well what if we work for a living and need to get to work?"
Counterclaim
Adequate
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86
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Well, you can awlays WALK to the public transportation area. Studies have shown that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses. This leaves us wondering, "Has Obama passed peak driving?"
Rebuttal
Adequate
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Is it gonna make us get lower in obesity, make the streets safer, and stop the pollution of the air? Getting rid of cars will decrease a lot of issues that we have in the world today, so getting rid of or decreasing the car-usage is a positive, not a negative.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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That the author did good job at explan the evidences like he saws,
Position
Ineffective
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"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a veicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditition by staying up and ount of their way" That it is imported to study Venus even if it dangers.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Venus ounce look like earth, like "Earth-like planet in our solar system
Claim
Adequate
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0
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Long age, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." That it tells us that it you'st to be livible.
Evidence
Adequate
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384bc05d9775
0B81C3067FF2
Venus is a challenging planet to study
Claim
Adequate
[ "Venus", "challenging", "planet", "study" ]
0
39
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9976738095283508 } ]
513
f57661d05705
0B81C3067FF2
like it saws, "numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." Venus is a challenging to travel to even if it so close.
Evidence
Adequate
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0
197
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8176280856132507 } ]
514
7a796141bb24
0B81C3067FF2
Traveling to Venus isn't imposible
Claim
Adequate
[ "Traveling", "Venus", "imposible" ]
0
35
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9931273460388184 } ]
515
8dd9a37c4025
0B81C3067FF2
like it saws, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginatin and innovation." It is posible to trave to Venus.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
202
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9889042973518372 } ]
516
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0B81C3067FF2
Venus is a challenging planet, that we like to study about and learn how it was formed.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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0
88
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.999427855014801 } ]
517
fd7df123f926
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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it may present. The author then goes on to tell us all of his facts that back up his claim
Position
Adequate
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0
221
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9960700273513794 } ]
518
eaa0c8b8cc97
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I believe the author makes a very good point.
Claim
Adequate
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0
46
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9996726512908936 } ]
519
da74a38ab8b8
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In paragraph 4 the author tells us even though Venus's surface had conditions five times more extreme than what we see on Earth, long ago it was covered with large oceans, rocky sediment and craters. If Venus's conditions used to be so similar to Earth then could it possibly have supported life?
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
297
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520
261ed0a975d7
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In paragraph 7 the author goes to tell us that scientists over at NASA have some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus like conditions.
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
193
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9914776682853699 } ]
521
de1ec5b18a04
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If we can somehow develop the technology to last in Venus like conditions wouldn't it be worth it to see what mysteries it holds. We have the technology at our fingertips, all we have to do is put in the time and effort to get to Venus.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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0
241
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.962410569190979 } ]
522
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limiting car usage could be a good thing for some people. only if they like to walk and do fun things with their lives.
Position
Adequate
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0
120
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9605644345283508 } ]
523
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0B8A0777A6E5
it saves people lots of money
Claim
Adequate
[ "saves", "people", "lots", "money" ]
0
30
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9987019300460815 } ]
524
696fbc8373a3
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They could have bigger and better things because they wouldnt have to pay a car note, or pay for gas every week
Evidence
Adequate
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0
112
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9983012676239014 } ]
525
80bca0992771
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Having a life without a car can sometimes be a bit scary exspecially if you need to do ,or be somewhere in the middle of the night . you may be ill and need a doctor immedialty you wouldnt be able to walk .
Counterclaim
Adequate
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2
207
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9957560896873474 } ]
526
573458b63e39
0B8A0777A6E5
But lets look on the positive side we do have ambulances and things of that sort so we really dont have that much to worry about.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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0
130
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8971975445747375 } ]
527
d14d53cd1594
0B8A0777A6E5
the most important part of this is that we have to be safe. and do things the right way
Claim
Ineffective
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0
88
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9991777539253235 } ]
528
31db09e20034
0B8A0777A6E5
I think NO cars is a good things saves me more money for shopping and the finer things in life.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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0
96
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.998913049697876 } ]
529
0cf2e9982192
0B8A0777A6E5
i also wouldnt have to beg my parents to take me anywhere because i would be my own transportation.
Claim
Adequate
[ "also", "wouldnt", "beg", "parents", "take", "anywhere", "would", "transportation" ]
0
103
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9006935954093933 } ]
530
ead763ee2857
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When does school end? It doesn't because of teachers who give students hard assignments to do over summer break. Summer projects are a fun way to engage students in learning over their 2 month break.
Lead
Adequate
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0
200
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9984174966812134 } ]
531
96762aa13b6c
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it should be student-designed
Position
Adequate
[]
0
30
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9949362277984619 } ]
532
a6696f10dc36
0BB223A348F6
let students gain leadership skills,
Claim
Effective
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0
37
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9960445165634155 } ]
533
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let them express their creativity.
Claim
Effective
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0
35
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9994795918464661 } ]
534
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Teachers-designed projects would allow students to have a baseline of where to start from. One positive of teacher-designed projects would be they are professionally designed (by the Teacher).
Counterclaim
Effective
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0
193
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9967646598815918 } ]
537
abe867447c00
0BB223A348F6
student-designed projects are more beneficial than teacher designed projects. They both have pros however the positives of student-designed projects outweigh the teachers. Projects designed by students allow them to gain leadership skills, and let them explore their curiosity or creativity.  
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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0
296
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9982073307037354 } ]
539
ed32b0ad1ee4
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Dr. Huang stated that his computer can identify a persons feeling just by scaning them. By the way it look the computer can verify a person experssions by the way that they look even thou some poeple in this world can understand expressions but techology is change and now it can nearly tell human emotion. But yet the differences here are that the computer can see emotions or no emotions at all.
Lead
Ineffective
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3
398
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.982559323310852 } ]
540
5d91d88baffd
0BD82CC1FC8C
Well the step to take in order to see if a person is showing emotions it would muscular action units. For the instruction 1&2 will determin that techology can tell which from which like a smile canbe tested by a computer or a real person. A machine can tell the difference.
Evidence
Ineffective
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1
274
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9496297836303711 } ]
541
1c12c96323b5
0BD82CC1FC8C
We need to look at the prons and cons cause a person can tell if a person is showing any emotion is how they are useing their mouth's muscular actions such as smiling or frowning. Telling a force one a real smile can be que trickey but a computer can tell the differences.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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2
273
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9920797944068909 } ]
542
c5e9a723847b
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Schools must be aware that if summer projects are always going to be required, the assignments should be student-designed
Position
Adequate
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0
122
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9976962208747864 } ]
544
d44b382522af
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students will have more urge to do them
Claim
Adequate
[ "students", "urge" ]
0
40
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8434672951698303 } ]
545
3c3373b8e4c3
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sometimes the projects can interfere with summer plans, making it troublesome to get work done.
Claim
Adequate
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0
96
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9994056224822998 } ]
546
22b2ea695630
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Student-designed projects could focus on what students question or wonder about in their day to day lives, peaking their interests and making the task feel more fun and creative. Students could receive a broad outline like 'write an essay' or 'create a display', and turn it into a unique piece that expresses themselves; something like a paper on endangered animals.
Claim
Effective
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0
368
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9976123571395874 } ]
548
5a2eee6a4a3c
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Student-designed projects allow students to create a work period and timing schedule for when doing the assignment works best for them.
Claim
Adequate
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0
136
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9949945211410522 } ]
550
3b7fe780a3bf
0BDD43321AFD
Some, especially teachers, might argue that having students design their own summer projects will lead to the minimal work necessary and a poorly done assignment. Teachers might say that students are primarily focused on their summers and just having fun, rather than getting something done that could benefit them in their next school yea
Counterclaim
Effective
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0
340
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9997267127037048 } ]
551
b1fac8fb8f84
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However, if the project is required for school, that typically means it is graded. Students won't try to do the least amount work possible just to save them time, if that means they will earn a D on the project. They will start the year off poorly. The overall effect of the project will outweigh how much time and effort is put into it.
Rebuttal
Effective
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1
338
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9996185302734375 } ]
552
56536c118079
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In a new modern classroom setting, students should have the liberty to design their own summer projects
Position
Effective
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0
104
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9942905902862549 } ]
555
eb9c9c0f803b
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because students are more inclined to learn when they have the liberty to decide their work,
Claim
Effective
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0
93
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9649702310562134 } ]
556
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0BF9F64D6FD1
the process of self exploration is the key to molding successful minds.
Claim
Effective
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0
72
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998325109481812 } ]
557
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The overall benefit of students having their education in their hands, outweighs the potential negative repercussions.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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0
119
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.851318895816803 } ]
560
98ebd90f6d94
0BF9F64D6FD1
Some may predict that students may slack off when given the opportunity to create their own summer projects.
Counterclaim
Effective
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0
109
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9996380805969238 } ]
561
3c1e34baca6e
0BF9F64D6FD1
While this is possible, when a student is pushed, surprising results follow. In addition, giving students that necessary push is how we can create a brighter future.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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0
166
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562
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Hi! Have you ever wanted to find a way to help people and animals when they think they have nothing to live for when they actually do? Do you want to give people food and shelter? Well we got just the right group for you to join!
Lead
Adequate
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0
230
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9985162615776062 } ]
563
e6bc4916c669
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Join the Seagoing Cowboys program so you can help people in need! We think that you would be perfect for the program! Here are some reasons why you should join!
Position
Adequate
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0
163
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9904587268829346 } ]
564
2eda975a1bb5
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You can help people and animals when needed.
Claim
Effective
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0
45
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9993788003921509 } ]
565
068d648fdd99
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Trust us there might be a lot of people who need it.
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
54
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9885751605033875 } ]
566
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You would also see great places like China, Greece, and other places in Europe! You might get to see the Great Wall of China, too! Wouldn't that be amazing!
Claim
Effective
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0
157
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9969874024391174 } ]
567
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You might save lives and meet great people who are talented and smart and would also need you.
Claim
Effective
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0
96
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9997459053993225 } ]
568
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0BFD128F5C01
You get to travel on seas!
Claim
Effective
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0
27
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9994127750396729 } ]
569
a31515a6bb5d
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The Alantic Ocean, Pacific Ocean, and others! You might get seasick, but we have some ginger for you that might help.
Evidence
Ineffective
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1
119
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.7624903321266174 } ]
570
e943359e7bf4
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So those are the reasons why we think you should join the program. If you like the idea of all the things that are listed feel free to join! Thank you, and we hope to see you there!
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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0
182
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998362064361572 } ]
571
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In the begin in the story it talks about how she had 83 percent happy and 9 percent digusted smile and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. And that her science teacher had graded her latest lab assignment. And that mona lisa at least according some new computer of showing her emotions.
Lead
Ineffective
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1
290
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.7735788822174072 } ]
572
2e6d4fa8cb4c
0C24337CD49E
In the body paragraph it talks about how that you have to show your emotions. And the neutral face showing no of there emotions. I wonder why the neutral face does want to show emotions. It will be good if they show emotions. But I think that the neutral face does want to show emotions. Becuase some people might look at them.
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
329
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8214529752731323 } ]
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