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The challeange of exploring venus Study venus is a pursuit to dangers, Venus is the challenging planet to humans because of the diffculties.
Position
Ineffective
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No livingthings lives on this planet if we caan find a solution to this problem we be one of the greatest achievement that human accomplish on earth.
Claim
Adequate
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we can also make this planet our planetary,
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Ineffective
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venus is one of the most challenging exploring planet on the slolar system. if we can find a way to overcome this challenges we should be able to over come all other planet on the solar system challegings this we dont have to worry about this earth twin to affect our own earth.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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When you attempt to find love there are dangers. The one you have chosen may have a history of being unfit to hold a relationship, or just has a bad makeup due to their past and they don't feel like changing now. Venus is just like the signifacant other you are looking for. Whilst it is a planet, it has numours dangers like it's chemical makeup, temperature,etc.
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The author couldn't be any better in this story on why even with it's dangers we on earth should venture out and see what Venus is all about. Giving us multiplie reasons why we need to find a way to get someone (or something) over there as soon as possible
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The first reason that was broguht upon my eyes was in paragraph eight where it states, "~but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors."
Evidence
Adequate
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when we are able to achieve the abilitiy to get over to our sister planet we will be able to find and conqure much more challenging issues
Claim
Adequate
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Another reason that the author wrote in the text was in paragraph 2 it states, "Ofter reffered to as Earth's 'Twin,' Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.
Evidence
Ineffective
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This shows me that when we are able to get over to this planet we will be able to see 'what is over on that side of the river'.Meaning that we will be able to see what the closest looking planet to earth is really about
Claim
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The third and final reason the author wrote about in the passage was written in paragraph three as it stated, " A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.
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This is showing me that we already know alot about the chemical makeup of this planet, but there is always something more we can figure out about this topic. Just like with anything theres always a second story or a second layer that tells us more. Here if we ever do decide to take on this task we will be able to see the entire chemical makeup of our sister planet Venus.
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In conclusion the author did an amazing job by giving us (the reader) multiple reasons on why we on earth should go and venture out in our solar system and figure out what Venus is truly all about. And maybe we'll be able to create this planet into a new habitat. The only way we shall know is if we are able to venture out and do such.
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The new technology used to undertstand facial expressions would be a valuable thing in a classroom
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This can help alot in schools,because the system will be able to understand the students emotions like confused,or bored,the system can modify and change the learning style
Claim
Adequate
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This can increase the students studying skills and also they would learn more efficiently.
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The text states that,a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,'Dr. Huang predicts."then it would be able to modify the lesson,like an effective human instructor.'This show that the facial recognition can help students to learn more.
Evidence
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The system can help teachers alot in schools to let them know what they need to change to teach better.
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In the future the facial recognizer might be able to replace teachers.
Claim
Ineffective
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The idea is still to far off because the system , still doesn't understand that most human comunications are none verbal. The system could help solve crimes and other things it would be able to recognize if a person is lying or not by their facial expresions.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The system would be a good way to teach students at schools or at home if possible. Now the students will not be bored in class,neither will they be confused because the system would be able to recognize it and change it
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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The progam still has alot of flaws
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but when is solved hopefully, we can have them in our classrooms in the future this could be the most valuable "teacher" so far it would be of a great value for schools.
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In Nick D'Alto's article, " Making Mona Lisa Smile", the author suggests that Dr. Hung's new facial regonation would be useful for many things including using it in a class room to read stusdents' emotional expressions.
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I agree with Dr. Hung that the software would be useful to help decipher mixed emoitions.
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In his article, he uses the Mona Lisa as an example, and I personally think that it was a good example to help show her conveyed expressions.
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Dr. Hung invented the Facial Action Coding System, which helps identify the emotions displayed on the human face,and paintings such as Leonardo da Vinci's Mona Lisa.
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If this technology was used in a classroom setting, I think that it could be used to help teachers understand if some of their students are enjoying the lesson. Or it could possibly be used to tell when the students are lying to their teachers. The Facial Action Coding System shows the six basic emotion that are associated with the movements of ones facial muscles. The basic emotions are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This technology can also identify mixed emotions.
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Humans perfom the same amount of emotions everyday.
Claim
Ineffective
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For example, a friend could probably tell how you feel by looking at your face. But some people might have trouble describing what each facial expression means. Dr. Hung had oserved had aritists like leonardo who had studied human anatomy that had helped them to paint human emotions. Similarly, Professor Hungs Facial Action Coding System is able to be electorically stored with some information about human anatomty and emotions.
Evidence
Adequate
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Lastly, there are fourty-four major muscles in the human face. For example. a muscle called the obricularis oculi pars palabraeus is the muscle that makes the crow's-feet shape around your eyes. Experts can tell a real smile from a fake smile by the way your mouth is moved. Facial muscles can help produce emotions, by the movement of your muscles.
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With the help of the Facial Action Coding System, I think that teachers could easily figure out the emotions that their students faces are conveying.
Claim
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This coding system seems to be revelotionary to me because of it can decipher emotions and it could help many people such as students, teachers, and even the government.
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In conclusion, I personally think that with the help of this technology teachers will be able to read into their students emotions better. Also, teachers would be able to tell if students are lying to them. The value of this technolgy would be able to help them read the facial expressions of many people with diasbilites who have trouble conveying emotions. I beleive that is this type of technology were to be used in a classroom that it would be a great help to many teachers.
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Adequate
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When I think about schools, I think about a little community because that's basically what it is. Everyone is together for most of the day,every single day. So yes I agree with everyone doing one extracurricular activity that way everyone has tried it and be part of the community.
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something to take into consideration is that i dont think the kids will really go.
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So there's pros and cons in this I know that but deciding if its something I truly believe in then no.
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Another con about the extracurricular activity is not every parent has time to pick their kid up after school because they rather pick the kids up instead of letting their kid walk home alone.
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Do I believe this is a good idea? Yes
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but that's not the question,the question was do I agree with it? No I don't.
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Im one of the kids that don't have time for this activity so knowing how my day goes and trying to add on it,really isnt gonna be good for me
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For the kids that do have the time and effort to actually do it can do it but it shouldnt have to be pushed on somebody to do it, it just be there like an option just in case you do have extra time and are able to really do it.
Claim
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The kids should want to do these things so they can join but if its not possible then it shouldnt be pushed on them,kids should have a choice if they wanna commit do something like that.
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The point is most of the kids just don't commit or have time or family events, everyone is different you can't just expect every kid just to go. So no I dont agree with what the princlai said at all and it should be there for kids to choose it or not for them to force it on the kids.
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There once was three citizen friends from boston who wanted who wanted to limit car usage to 70 percent they realized it was a good idea
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it'll help people avdanced experiment in low-car suburban life but its basic precepts are being adopted around the world
Claim
Ineffective
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attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation with less parking space in this new approach stores are far away to walk to on a main street rather than in small malls around some distant highway
Evidence
Ineffective
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its a good idea because if they give up their cars therre will less traffic no accidents or any parking space
Claim
Adequate
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it will be less problems with people they think if they give up there cars there will be a safer street for everyone
Evidence
Adequate
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0
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some people didnt like idea because if they give up there cars they wont be able to get to their jobs on time and at the same some people live to far from jobs and homes that they want keep people driving their cars  
Counterclaim
Adequate
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Schools should make it a requirement for all students participate in a extracurricular activity
Position
Adequate
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0
96
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it helps students meet new people and make new friends,
Claim
Adequate
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0
56
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it can introduce students to something they've overlooked or have never heard of before
Claim
Adequate
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0
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it can increase social activity among students.
Claim
Adequate
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0
48
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having students join and participate in an extracurricular activity can help them meet new people and make new friends.
Claim
Effective
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0
120
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requiring students to join an extracurricular activity can introduce students to something they've overlooked in the past, or something completely new.
Claim
Effective
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0
152
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schools should make it so all students have to participate in an extracurricular activity such as a club or a sport because it helps students make new friends and build relationships, it can introduce students to something they've overlooked in the past, and it can increase social activity among students.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable
Position
Effective
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116
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it would allow teachers to know when students become confused
Claim
Effective
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0
62
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are being dishonest
Claim
Effective
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0
20
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or are depressed and possibly having problems at home.
Claim
Effective
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0
55
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In the classroom, it is common for students to tend to get confused while being taught a lesson. It is also common for students to get bored and become uninterested in the lesson at hand. With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers can make sure that their students are acquiring the best education possible and absorbing all of the material.
Claim
Effective
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346
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School behavior is a big part of a students education. If a student is constantly acting out and misbehaving it could affect his or her education pretty badly. Although, that is why Facial Action Coding Systems could also be very useful in a classroom environment.
Evidence
Adequate
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The technology could be able to detect if a student is being dishonest, which could prove very handy when dealing with situations with delinquents and trouble-makers.
Claim
Effective
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167
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In the excerpt, the author writes, "To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a "smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful," (D'Alto). In this quote, the author tells the reader about some facial muscle clues that allow experts to tell if a famous figure is being dishonest. These are some of the same facial clues the FACS looks for.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
386
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Finally, The FACS could help find if students are depressed or having problems at home.
Claim
Adequate
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1
88
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The machine can detect six different emotions, including sadness. This could prove useful when dealing with distressed students. "Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles" (D'Alto). This quotes tells the reader about the emotions the machine can read.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
384
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The best way to ensure that students continue learning over break is to assign teacher-designed projects.
Position
Adequate
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106
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 Summer projects should be teacher-designed because teachers have a better understanding of the material,
Claim
Effective
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0
106
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the project will be less stressful for students
Claim
Effective
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0
48
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teacher-designed projects will prevent misjudgment of students by teachers.
Claim
Effective
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0
77
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Teachers should design summer projects because they have a better understanding of the material they are trying to teach.
Claim
Effective
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0
122
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Another reason teachers should design the summer project, is that the project will be less stressful to students overall.
Claim
Effective
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0
122
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Some teachers may argue that student-designed summer projects are an outlet for students to show their creativity. They believe that students can showcase their intellectual level by completing student-designed projects and the teachers can get a better understanding of their students' beliefs and preferences through student-designed projects
Counterclaim
Effective
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0
345
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However, student-designed projects are not always the best reflection of the students and their work ethic.
Rebuttal
Effective
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108
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However, with teacher-designed projects, students can work with their future teacher to plan ahead to complete the assignment or complete a different assignment entirely depending on their situation. Students would not be forced to settle for something that is not a true reflection of their work ethic because of their circumstances.
Claim
Effective
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335
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Growing up in a constantly changing environment, students have had to learn to adapt to the world around them. In school, students are taught to be open and ready to learn, while still facing the ups and downs in the journey of childhood to adulthood. Students make close bonds with their friends and even a few choice teachers. Students choose to whom they share their emotions with and at what time they wish to do so
Lead
Effective
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420
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Emplimenting a computer system in schools that is capable of reading a students emotions is inappropriate, lazy, and dangerous.
Position
Effective
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128
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This technology is incredible. It's capable of easily figuring out what someone feels right when they're feeling it. Empathy is an intimate ability one experiences with another. Most people have the ability to sense others emotions, "For instance, you can probably telll how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face." There is a prominent understanding in the natural world regarding emotions
Evidence
Adequate
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0
403
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Sometimes not every one wants to be figured out and displayed to their peers.
Claim
Adequate
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0
78
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In school, students are faced with one major task: to learn. Teachers are faced with the task of teaching. A teacher's job is to engage students and the students job is to stay engaged with the teacher.
Evidence
Effective
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203
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Emplementing facial reading teachnology is innappropriate and dangerous to the privacy of students, and it threatens the basic principles school systems were founded upon.
Claim
Effective
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Giving power to technology is complacent, instead of working with people to improve learning habits or teaching methods, adults would be taking the easy way out.
Claim
Effective
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Some might argue that these computers might be a useful tool for counselors in schools
Counterclaim
Adequate
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87
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This is a valid argument, but this also compromises the position of school counselors.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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87
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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggest that studing venus is worth while even though their are extreme dangers while doing it.
Position
Adequate
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0
157
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The author supports this idea in the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" by the similarites to earth making the dangers worth while
Claim
Adequate
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139
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the testing on diffrent pieces of equitmeant to withstand the extreme climate of venus,
Claim
Adequate
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88
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9464630484580994 } ]
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the life they believe was once their making it a plave they want to explore.
Claim
Adequate
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77
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The author in the article explains many resons in which he or she thinks the dangers of venus are worth it for science
Claim
Adequate
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119
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.5738397240638733 } ]
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one of them being the similarities which they can see from far distance the planet has to earth. the author says Venus is often referred to as the earths twin due to the size, mountain like, and believed to have many oceans and waterways making venus very simlar to the earth. with venus being the closest planet as well to the earth having a closer distance to venus from earth.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
381
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Though Venus is concidered the twin to earth it has many diffrent features making it dangerous for scientist to explore the planet. One of these extreme dangers is the diffrence in climate as said in the article Venus reaches upwards of 800 degrees Fahrenheit easily melting most metals making it hard to recieve samples from the planet.
Evidence
Adequate
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Though they have tested many new products in chambler ith simlar climate to venus finding new ways to hopefully find more out about Venus.
Claim
Ineffective
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139
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lastly the author also talks about how Venus most likely had life on the planet similar to that of earths
Claim
Ineffective
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0
106
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scientist are interested in finding out more about this even though many dangers are included in this task. Finding new ways to make sysems in which can be sent to Venus is difficult but found early computers with physical componets might be the key to their succsess in finding out avout Venus past.
Evidence
Ineffective
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In conclution Venus has many similarities to earth, but due to the extreme conditions of Venus it makes it hard for scientist to explore and find out more about the planet, even though it is the closest to the planet earth. These dagers and risk are worthwhile due to the simlarities the earth shares with venus, the new test of equtmeant in which can withstand these climates, and the life in which they believe use to be on Venus all make exporing Venus, even with dangers worth the time.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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491
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Students often moan and groan about summer projects that their teachers assign them to do over summer break to assure they continue learning over the period they are not in school. The projects most of the time, have a set rule book to follow that was issued by the teacher and it makes the project boring and not enjoyable for the students to do, basically being a burden the students have to over come during their relaxing summer break.
Lead
Effective
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These projects that get assign should be more student-designed
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Adequate
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students can be more freely creative with their own ideas
Claim
Adequate
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it will be more enjoyable to do for them,
Claim
Adequate
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