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Would you like to be forced to choose an extracurricular activity that you don't like?
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The principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea
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not every students like extracurricular activity
Claim
Adequate
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there are not a variety of activities to choose from
Claim
Adequate
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some students already participates in some extracurricular activities outside of school.
Claim
Adequate
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Extracurricular activities are not everyone's favorite, most students would rather do their school work than extracurricular activities. One reason for that is the amount of work the students are receiving. The teachers are giving students an extreme amount of work that the student's interest towards extracurricular activities has declined. A way to fix the problem is to make the lessons less ornate, and more simple.
Evidence
Adequate
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The school has some choices for extracurricular activities such as sports, year book, and student council. There are not many selections that are available for them. For example, if a student doesn't have a favorite choice, then they would be forced to choose something they don't favor. That would diminish their view towards school and the principal. The school can create more choices for the students to pick from, and it could make a difference.
Evidence
Adequate
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Extracurricular activities such as swimming which is not possible to be done in school. I think schools should focus on the main subjects such as Math, Science, and English, and not extracurricular activities. Even if there are extracurricular activities in school, there should be a choice for it.
Evidence
Adequate
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In conclusion, the principal's idea of all students participating in at least one extracurricular activity is a bad idea because not every students like extracurricular activity, there are not a variety of activities to choose from, and some students already participates in an extracurricular activities outside of school. Extracurricular activities should be a choice not a must.
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Adequate
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I think Luke's point of view of convincing people to go on a Seagoing Cowboy trip.
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Ineffective
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I agree with the claim against the value of using this technology to read student's emotional expressions.
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Adequate
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First off, we perform these calcutions everyday, as we can tell if our friend is happy or sad by looking at their face most of the time. Also, video imagery tells us that the facial emotions for each emotion are universal.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Another big reason is that we really don't know just how much computers can do, it can be where computers detect whether you're happy or sad.
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Ineffective
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In a whole, this is a lot to disagree with, since computers are taking over our world now so I believe this is a great idea. Reason being is that we have video imagery, the amazing and undiscovered knowledge of a computer, and our own brains because we calculate expressions on our own every day. These our all major factors that align with the fact that I believe technology should be able to read students' emotional expressions.
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Adequate
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, they should not use cars
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they would have to pay for gas
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people would cause accidents and get hurt or killed.
Claim
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Cars can be very dangerous and could brake down or cause your life.
Evidence
Adequate
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They can be expensive and some that you can not afford. Cars can eat your money away just by draveling long distance and always got to check your car before you go anywhere.
Evidence
Adequate
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cars are apart of people lives and every day there will be a car on a road. the united states expanses suburban ideas about the car cultures. Americans are making all sorts of kind of cars and trying to build them more safer and better for the people driving them.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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The Facial Action Coding System is a new descoverage of the scientifics. This new descoverage can help in some situation. It can help in many situations with the acception of the person. Fothermore it could be and not helpfull used in school
Lead
Adequate
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FACS can be used in school for knowladge.
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In school can be used for give a lesson,because it will give examples of muscles on your face,
Claim
Ineffective
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for example on of them can be orbiculris. It can teach the kids that good to show they emotions and how they show them and how they muscles act when they do them. Fothermore it can show the students that they muscles not only express emotions they can make them to.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Also this can help with students that have problems in they houses and they try to hide they problems
Claim
Adequate
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It can be also used for bullying to see why kids are quiet and scared.
Evidence
Adequate
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This experiment it can be help in differents part of the country no only in schools, it can help for example in hospitals
Claim
Ineffective
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to see how the people that can't move they face or have a muscles problems can tell how they feeling
Evidence
Ineffective
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It's always important to know how other person feel about, because if they sad or angry make them laugh so they can have a big smile in they faces.
Evidence
Adequate
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In that work we gonna explain, give ideas and talk a little bit about the problems at the study of Venus because that planet is very dangers to survival
Position
Adequate
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Though Venus is a "sister" of the Earth Planet is not the same, Venus is not safetly to people live in their
Claim
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because doesn't have the sufficient oxygen to survival. Thoughthe austronomers are fascined with Venus because is the most similar planet to the Earth. But this planet obviusly have a differents to Earth like, the surface on Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees that is crazy and impossible to survival and in venus are present Volcanos eruptions.
Evidence
Adequate
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A idea for the NASA from me to send people to study the planet, is implement a new jetplane more security for thr austronomers for they can survival and can study the planet. And a new uniform most special for the can have the capacity to survival that dangers problems at Venus.
Evidence
Ineffective
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With that work we can explain and understand better about the problems with that planet and have ideas to a better study.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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By the author of this topic is really persauding by true facts where it makes u think.
Position
Ineffective
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During all this time all the best and expert sciencetist are working together to test a method nd see if we can live on that planet without dying or not producing food or water or even shelter.
Claim
Ineffective
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While testing we figured out that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.
Evidence
Ineffective
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So that is why I think during the proccess on living venus or in the future testing methods if we could live pn venus or see if we can grow crops or bring like equiment to test samples on we can evole on this planet near us.
Claim
Ineffective
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Even the thought of going to a new planet is a big turn of events because we dont know how its atmosphere works or gravity or air/oxygen or weather climate change or anything but we are learning about it really fast where we have to make a high expert group of people to risk their lives to see if we can produce our species or our tech,food,citys, or even animal life
Evidence
Ineffective
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limting use of aoto-mobiles can help change the envierment
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just simply slow down the use of them
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Adequate
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simply make green cars
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If you dont agree with me then why are you still reading go hop on your envirment killing machiens and ruin our lovely home called earth.
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Adequate
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First of all, I feel like it's pretty reliable,
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BUT one of the parts that threw me off was when Professer Nicu Sebe said that shes "83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry."
Evidence
Ineffective
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Professer Nibu said the process begins when the computer construts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an "action unit. Then his friend Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of FAC (Facial Action Coding). Dr Huang then observed that "The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression."
Evidence
Ineffective
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By using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks the facial movements in either or real face or painted picture of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions, each expression is compared against a neutral face. In fact, Dr. Huang said that we humans perform the same impressive calculation everyday, like for instance, me going to one of my close friends and seeing them frowning I will assume that they're upset about something.
Evidence
Ineffective
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According to the machine if you frown at it, the next ad will be different.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I feel like a machine like this would be very useful for computers so they can track if a student is getting distracted, tired or bored, because I feel like it could give the student a warning or something to not fall asleep during a test.
Claim
Adequate
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0
240
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628
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And lastly, no, the expirement didn't really make me happy, I tried smiling and it felt awkward.
Evidence
Ineffective
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1
97
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9995850920677185 } ]
629
e5a06bcdc827
0D45F6F0E185
According to the "Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion" moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but it may even help producethem in a way,
Claim
Adequate
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1
152
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630
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which was very shocking to me because I never knew anything could work like that. Reading this article made me feel smarter in a way, learning something I've never heard or seen before
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
185
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9982655644416809 } ]
631
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But in conclusion I feel as if this article is helpful and should be seen to my peers.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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0
87
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9936163425445557 } ]
632
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I feel like that the use of the emotional expressions of students in a class room is not good.
Position
Adequate
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0
95
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9998050332069397 } ]
634
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First of all it is not 100% offical
Claim
Adequate
[ "First", "100", "offical" ]
0
36
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.987558126449585 } ]
635
700e99e89ff6
0D7FAACC389B
Second of all it could fill you computer with viruses.
Claim
Adequate
[ "Second", "could", "fill", "computer", "viruses" ]
0
55
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9978514909744263 } ]
636
6f294c4e5b7e
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last one is that it could be a lot of money to get in and most likly to fix it. It is a lot of work getting one of those and the thing is why buy it or even consider it, if it is not offical.
Claim
Adequate
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1
192
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9983965754508972 } ]
637
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The facial action coding system is not totaly offical.
Claim
Ineffective
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0
55
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9972042441368103 } ]
638
2f783dfa9868
0D7FAACC389B
The fact that facial action coding system is basiclly thinking and telling you how to feel it doesn't really know what you really feel.
Claim
Adequate
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1
136
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9995643496513367 } ]
640
1813fe468ae8
0D7FAACC389B
I feel like sense the camera is always going to just be watching you to see what you are feeling that is creepy. Like it said it if thinks your happy when an ad pops up it's going to pull up more and more ads and you might even get a virus. It is going to end up making some damages to your computer. Most likely people are not going to feel safe. What if someone gets to hack you computer. They are going to be watching you all day, everyday.
Evidence
Adequate
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0
444
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9960195422172546 } ]
641
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Sense it said that it will cost a lot of money to get it. I won't be fair if some schools have it and if some don't.
Claim
Adequate
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0
117
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9981330037117004 } ]
642
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The facial action coding system will be hard to get. Some school can just get enough for the basic's. If they can't even get enought to get one what if is stops working or something goes wrong. The people are going to have to find more moeny just ot fix it. Most likely, they are going to have to stop doing some clubs or some after school activities thing like that. Just to try to afford the moeny to fix the program.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
420
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9997674822807312 } ]
643
6c213c5ec564
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Computers can do many things for us. The idea that a computer can read your emotions is amazing
Lead
Adequate
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0
96
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9998220801353455 } ]
644
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I do not belive it is true. I will believe it when I see it.
Position
Ineffective
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0
61
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645
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In paragraph 8 it says " But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways ising the zygomatic major and different muscle, the risorius." however this may be true for most people; there has to be someone out there in our world of 7 billion that smiles there smiles with their zygomatic muscle or their risorius muscle
Evidence
Adequate
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1
322
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646
9cf5c25d26c7
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Everyone has diffrent emotions and everyone shows them diffrently
Claim
Adequate
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1
66
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9966004490852356 } ]
647
750d9f876e06
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The muscles in our face does say a lot about the emotions we are feeling.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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0
74
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9996249675750732 } ]
648
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0D89C8189022
I do belive to understand ones emotions it has to be very clear someone is sad, with tears, or you know the person well, In paragraph 5 the artical states " For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face."
Evidence
Adequate
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1
252
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649
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In paragraph 3 it brings up "Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprised, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness"
Claim
Adequate
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1
127
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650
12c7bd242708
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but there are way more than 6 emotions that can be reconized
Evidence
Adequate
[ "way", "6", "emotions", "reconized" ]
1
61
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8447678685188293 } ]
651
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This is why I believe computures can not read your emotions
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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1
60
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9992677569389343 } ]
652
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For students, summer projects can feel like a lot, summer break is supposed to be filled with fun times and vacations while projects are almost the exact opposite. Removing summer projects all together isnt an option,
Lead
Effective
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0
218
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9969690442085266 } ]
654
e6be044be148
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so when it comes to the question "should summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed" teacher-designed projects reign supreme, as it benefits both the student and the teacher in multiple different ways.
Position
Effective
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0
216
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655
a7388b24b94f
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As a teacher, your main job is proving students with a learning experience that will help them grow as people. Having a student design a summer project would not be nearly as powerful as the impact a teacher-designed project would.
Claim
Effective
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0
232
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.7773377895355225 } ]
656
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Teachers are well informed and know a lot more than most students and because of this it is their responsibility to provide a student with a project rather then have them create one themselves. This is especially reinforced in younger children, such as grades k-6, as they still need a lot of direction and having a student-designed project would not be as viable or coherent as a teacher-designed project.
Evidence
Adequate
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0
407
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657
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Teachers have it difficult sometimes, as they are trying their best to provide students with a learning experience, but teachers also deserve to have their job be a little easier
Evidence
Adequate
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0
179
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9960675239562988 } ]
658
efee4263f461
0D91FC8A9FE7
Creating a teacher-designed project as opposed to a student-designed one, would be far easier to grade and create a rubric for
Claim
Effective
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0
127
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.989577054977417 } ]
659
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0D91FC8A9FE7
. In student-designed projects you have a lot of variety and no one follows a central guideline, however in a teacher-designed project, you can maintain the variety but also contain a set of rules that benefits both the students and teachers, as the students have more clearly defined rules to guide and provide structure to their projects. This also benefits the teachers, as they can easily grade the assignment and provide a fair grading experience.
Evidence
Effective
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0
453
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9995847344398499 } ]
660
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Finally, teachers have everyone's best interest at heart when designing projects. Teachers will always design something challenging and beneficial to the students education.
Claim
Effective
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0
174
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9997596144676208 } ]
661
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Teachers play well informed, and important roles in a students life while they develop, and education is a very big part of student development so, projects should be designed with a teachers interests at heart. Because of that, when it comes down to it, teacher-designed projects are generally more helpful, easier, and responsible then a student-designed project would be.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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0
375
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9962091445922852 } ]
663
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I feel like I am for the value of this use of technology, because you can calculate other peoples facial emotions and your facial movements.
Position
Adequate
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0
141
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.999517560005188 } ]
664
8e6ac3f9c82b
0DB48DDD9022
I feel like if you can calculate emotions on a persons face you could understand that person better and what there feeling.
Claim
Adequate
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0
124
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.8104828596115112 } ]
665
0d8a026f5b45
0DB48DDD9022
This technology could observe how our face is formed in the future.
Claim
Ineffective
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0
69
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9914392232894897 } ]
667
b8fc136de6aa
0DB48DDD9022
This new technologyis the same technology for making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or surgery. " Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication " that Dr. Huang had. Computured need to understand that, too " said Dr. Huang. Your personal computer can't handle the complex of the algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.
Evidence
Ineffective
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2
377
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9946911931037903 } ]
668
0662a80017a8
0DB48DDD9022
You sometimes has to ask yourself " Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?" and " Can your lab partner recognize which one? " So I think that this technology is a good idea.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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0
198
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.995936393737793 } ]
669
f473bc4b6068
0DC3BDC76434
In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit even with the dangers on the planet.
Lead
Adequate
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0
148
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9983799457550049 } ]
670
5939f4967636
0DC3BDC76434
Venus is a worthy pursuit because the more we know about our sister planet the more things we get to do with it.
Position
Ineffective
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0
113
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.999451220035553 } ]
672
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In the article it talks about a facon mars that has appeared on Viking 1 while looking for a place to land.
Lead
Adequate
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1
108
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8241522908210754 } ]
673
f9f421835316
0DDCAFAEA487
The face is a natral land form
Position
Adequate
[ "The", "face", "natral", "land", "form" ]
1
31
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9369590282440186 } ]
674
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0DDCAFAEA487
because thats like saying our land forms were made by aliens and thats why we have mountains, valleys, and plains.
Evidence
Ineffective
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0
115
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.986940324306488 } ]
675
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0DDCAFAEA487
In the article it says "Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural land form. There was no alien monument after all.".
Evidence
Adequate
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2
196
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9741569757461548 } ]
676
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0DDCAFAEA487
The article also states about the face on mars"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West."
Evidence
Adequate
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0
169
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9906153678894043 } ]
677
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0DDCAFAEA487
Another quote that proves this is a land form is "Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the Face on mars."The photo of mars is a land form because it says right there in the passage it is a lava dome and it is about the same hieght as the face on mars.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
298
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9960673451423645 } ]
678
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0DDCAFAEA487
In paragraph 6 it says "although few scientists belived the face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia bacame a priority fo NASA whe Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended."
Evidence
Ineffective
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3
259
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9523892402648926 } ]
679
1bccace3f49f
0DEDD9E3222F
In this essay, I'm going to talk about the new softare, that is called the Facial Action Coding system, which can help the computer to knows if we are sad, happy or angry. Putting the example of the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's called Mona lisa.
Lead
Adequate
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1
248
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.7425138354301453 } ]
680
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0DEDD9E3222F
this software is a very good idea, for the teachers and the students too.
Position
Adequate
[ "software", "good", "idea", "teachers", "students" ]
0
74
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9994763731956482 } ]
681
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The software can calculate "emotions" like math homework. Just recognizing the subtle facial movemets that persons use to express how they feel.
Evidence
Adequate
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1
145
[ { "label": "NEGATIVE", "score": 0.9829868078231812 } ]
682
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0DEDD9E3222F
The new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application for a variety of industries
Claim
Adequate
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0
105
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9987403750419617 } ]
683
b81bcd8815a2
0DEDD9E3222F
A big example is The subject of Leonardo da Vinci's, Mona lisa. Da vinci studied anatomy to thelp them paint facial muscles for paint special emotions
Claim
Ineffective
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1
151
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.9932253956794739 } ]
685
9353d4a72337
0DEDD9E3222F
This subject is really intented to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how this can computer can do. Your PC can't handle the use to decode Mona lisa smile. But this invent can write down simple instructions that "encode" differet emotions. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.
Evidence
Ineffective
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2
392
[ { "label": "POSITIVE", "score": 0.8732458353042603 } ]
686